i love it

Great ORIGINAL story!
I liked how you used legends and angels also protective generals.

What a wonderful story! I truly enjoyed your unique twists on the Sailor Moon Universe and thank you for sharing your talents with us.

I look forward to reading more from you. :)

Really, really liked this! One of the best Sailor Moon stories around. And yes, I know that this was a few chapters ago, but I love Jadeite blowing a raspberry at Serena in his helmet. I really had to laugh at that one. Thank you very much!

awesome story so far!
i love the reverse effect!
Serena with the Generals and Darien with the Scouts
love it!

That was a really good story!!
I loved it so much. I'm really speachless, lol.

As chessy as most of this was it was still a decent story and a fun read - I found myself laughing through a good portion of it (mostly because of the predictable/chessy lines lol but it was still good). A bit of cleaning up with the spelling and grammer and it could be great. Otherwise good job and keep up the work. The more you write, the better you get.

OH MY GOSH! This is damn nice! I like it!
Thanks for this nice story! Thanks Thanks Thanks and Thanks a million time!
Like the way you plot out the whole thing! It was nice! Thanks!

I enjoyed this story so much. I really liked the spin that you put on the entire thing, in particular allowing us to get to know the Generals in a non-evil capacity. ;) Wonderful job!!

i loved it, though im partial to the Zoi being male, i did enjoy the story. got me a little confued about some of your measurments, i had to do the conversions in my head, i'm an american , as if you didn't realize that , lol. i havn't done the math since i graduated. easiest way to make osme one feel stupid lol.
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This is one of my favorite stories! I love it. I swear that you had me laughing my butt off! And CRYING! This was good, once I started I couldn't stop.

AW! I LOVE IT! It was like the best ever!

i just want to tell you that i think this is an awesome spin on the story. not only was it unique, it also gives people a chance to get to know the generals. awesome read

it was good it was good it was good! ^^ heh heh... great job!

Beautiful! I like your plots, so complex... I'm pretty obsessed with winged figures too, so I appreciate very much all the angel-related imaginery and symbolism. And you mold it perfectly with SM's world.
It's a pity that such gems as yours do not have more reviews. They'd truly deserve to be known better.