 Black And White Kirara 2009-04-17 . chapter 9A very very intriguing story I have to say! I do find it a bit wierd that so few people could tell at the beginning that the hanyou was Naraku... Oh well *shrug* Wasn't everyone.
I've only just finished reading what you've done so far and I'm really keen to see it continued! Naraku obsessed with Kagome! Like he was with Kikyo - should be interesting. Love like how your dealing with Kagura and Kanna's relationship too. |
 Tantei-san 2006-11-09 . chapter 2ok, it was so totaly obvious that it was naraku. ESPECIALLY when he said kanna, only a retard cudn't relize that. |
 Penwalla 2005-12-31 . chapter 4wow..the pairings not going to be narakukagome, is it? that's just evil-if this wasn't so addictive i'd quit reading. |
 funarahi 2005-12-08 . chapter 4Kagura is funny. Lol. Nice chappie. |
 NekoYasha101 2005-11-27 . chapter 4nice, i liked that . it was realy good if u ask me. funny that people didn't get who he was at first ... anywho , i liked it , and i cant wait 4 the next one . latz . ja ne (goodbye) |
 xeroox 2005-11-27 . chapter 4i like :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):) |
 Reads-way-2-much 2005-11-22 . chapter 4What you end it there you are so rude i love this story and you torment me with it so not fair |
 Reads-way-2-much 2005-11-04 . chapter 3bumbumbum hehehe i like it so far a little creepy though |
 Malingo13 2005-07-13 . chapter 3love the start of the story, in fact i love all ur stories. please write more.
signed,
kara
ps- i knew it who it was after reading the frist chapter, and i have only been watching inuyasha for a month. |
 inuyasha_girl 2005-06-29 . chapter 3 I'm sorry if I yelled a little. I've yelled for you to 'Update Soon!' like I do with all fanfic writers and I didn't consider your feelings. If I knew about your cousin and all the stess you're under, I wouldn't have pushed you. If I was one of them cauing you stess..I'm sorry. I know you didn't yell at me in the Authors note but I feel partly responsible for your stess. Again I'm sorry!
Your story isn't that bad! Really!! You're doing pretty well for someone who is worried about their cousin! If it was me, I wouldn't be able to write ANYTHING! Don't stop writing. I can wait for you to get rid of your stess and I hope others can too! Hopefully people will stop yelling at you. I hope your cousin's leg heals. |
 FFchick 2005-06-29 . chapter 3This is an interesting chapter and I really do like what you've done with it. The only problem is that there isn't much to the chapters. But other than that, it's a good story. |
 V.X.O 2005-06-28 . chapter 3THIS IS VXO AGAIN! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! ~V.X.O~ |
 KagomeKissez 2005-06-28 . chapter 3Wow... I still think ALL your stories are great. And i wouldn't yell at you. :) Bu then again it wasen't me. Anyway still going strong. And hey talk to me on msn sometime. |
 NekoYasha101 2005-06-28 . chapter 3I LIKED ^.^ ... so people didn't know who it was ?? wow ... blonde much ... ?? ... i got it ^.^ ... and now uve made it TOTALLY clear ... so no one can not get it ... dense people ! ^.^ ... well anywayz ... SO GLADE U DECIDED 2 CONTINUE ! ^.^ ... I CANT WAIT 4 U 2 PUT UP MORE ... latterz ^.^ |
 Gamer135 2005-06-28 . chapter 3I apologize that my revews pissed you off. I di not realize how much stress you were under. You do make very good fanfics. I havn't been getting much sleep latly. I do hope you don't get put under any more stress to update. I'll be patient my self. take your time. |