All-in-all your story is great!I think you should continue.I mean, you said it was a one shot but I think it could be more.

I hope this is reasuring to hear.I'm really looking forward to reading more of your story. Update please!

hey that was really good except 4 no inukik... kag is so not beter thasn others.. update n a little bit of inukik plz

I thought it was Inuyasha until the very end. I loved it! I'm not a big Nakuru/Kagome fan but I still loved it

Yesh! Nar/Kag all the way babay! xD

I love it, but the grammar was a bit...sketchy. Work on it. But other than that, I love the whole suprise at the end with Naraku! Go Nar/Kag!

Hm... SOMEBODY idolizes Kagome a little too much...don't forget she's human too!

Whoa that was kinda creepy hehe. Great oneshot!

Is it Naraku? i'm confussed...Now onto the review: Very mysterious i must say. I think you should continue with this and actually make it into a story. Good luck.

Who is it though? Guess I'll find out in the next chapter Update soon!