Hi,

first of all, I found your fanfic, or rather the first chapter of your fanfic, tonight and enjoyed reading it.
In my opinion you portrayed The Sorrow very well so far. He's one of my favorite characters in the whole Metal Gear Solid series, so I was more then pleased when I found out this part was about him. :)
Well done :)
Oh, and by the way: I enjoyed the little StarWars-reference ;)

Is there a chance you ever continue this fic? I'd really appreciate if you did :)


Greets,

Snookermaniac

C'mon dude! What's taking you so long to update?! You got something great here!

Totally Awesome is the only way to describe this story. If you do the rest of the Cobras like you did the Sorrow, then this hands down will be the best Cobra Unit Fanfic I've ever read. Update soon!

Wow, this was pretty good. For what it's worth, I do hope you continue it. The Cobras are among some of the coolest game villains ever, I think.