hi. i love this story! write more and fast,please! keep writing! ^-^

hey your story is AWSOME and i love how they don't just fall in love like that i doesn't happen like that in the real world and probly will never happen so don't stop and i was demongirl3987 i am not any more i'm called pain303

hey whens that next one comin'.

Great story. Will you be updating soon? I hope you do, I would really like to keep reading.

good chapter
im glad you wont make them fall in love quickly
i hate that
love at first sight doesnt exist in my little world lol
so woo for you

I love the dynamic you have here. I hope you keep writing this story :)

good chapter

hi

hi i'm in love with your stories but could you make more than one chapter at a time plz i check my stories every day for up dates i've been waiting for yours

PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!
continue the story. Great story by the way.

first i would like to say that i love your story. its really great. second i am begging you to please please update. not know what happens next is killing me.
Brittney

lol great chapter love where your taking the story!

hey love this story hope there is more.

thank you

This is a great story, however, spelling mistakes and trip up a reader and make the story have a little less... presence? I don't know, it just makes it lose something.

I would be happy to Beta for you. Just ask if you need me.

Love the story so far! It captures both inuyahsa's and Kagome's personality's peerfectly even though they are both in a completely differnt environment and ide like to give you Kudos because i havent seen alot of authors who could stay true to their personality's once they were taken out of their natural environment. So, keep up the good work and i look forward to reading on as the story unfolds to whatever end that may stretch out from your mind, through your finger tips, and on to my computer screen:)