This is great so far...you've captured both characters really well. I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment!

What do you mean that she's not coming back!?!?!?!!?!?!?!!?!?!? SHE HAS TO COME BACK! (or at least Erik has to go after her) You really need to continue this, please!
Great job so far...

God Bless,
Peace, Love, & Hobbits,
xAdenX

Please continue!

Wow. You should add to this story.

Oh, very good! Please do continue. It would be interesting to find out if she returns. We also need to find out the real reason she was leaving! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE UPDATE SON!

you know.. if there's one thing that ticks me off about writers.. is that they come up with too many stories and never finish them.

and it seems like you're doing that now.. how many stories do you have uncompleted? like 4 or 5? you're a talented writer and i enjoy your stories but maybe you should focus on those stories for now and updating regularly instead of writing new stories all the time.

Oh, so sad and sweet! I love it!

You have to update! He has to go after her! Don't stop there!