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| Raina-Bess 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseso sad, but great story. nice job |
| israeli-american 2007-11-04 ch 1, | abuseSo depressingly beautiful...It felt so real, as if I were standing there...I really felt the grief, I had tears in my eyes... israeli-american |
| Glowen 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abuseHallo, I'm an Italian girl and I like your story because it's very very lovely and well written!!I'm going to translate it into my lenguage (Italian) and if you give me your permission I'm going to publish it on an italian site ( I'll credit you. When I'll be able to send you a message (3 days..) I'll contact you to have your permission! ;-) I hop yuo'll give me it! Compliments for your story (i love the lost scene, too) and bye! ^_^ -Glo- |
| HannahCimsGwendolyn 2006-08-15 ch 1, | abuseYou really did fill in the blanks magnificantly, and the reaction is believable for all of the characters. Very well written, and very powerful. -Hannah |
| Samdum the Bouncing Hobbit 2006-06-27 ch 1, | abuseGood missing scene, I like it. I think that's how most of them would've taken it. Stupid Cameron... ~Samdum~ |
| SilverRain 228 2006-05-19 ch 1, | abuseAfter reading your excellent everwood fic i decided to check out your other fics. I saw the Dead Poets Society fic, and that being my favorate movie of all time i had to read this. This was fantastic. I too have always wondered how the other boys found out and now whenever i watch the movie i'll probably always be imagining this is how it was. Thats how good your fic was. so plausable. so real. Any chance of another Dead Poets fic? this one was great. |
| Tresa Cho 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abuseOoh, I liked it. Very good, very Charlie. I think you captured him very nicely. Great job. |
| Hyrado 2006-01-10 ch 1, | abuseOmg. So sad! I loved this, it was so totally real... Especially that bit about cameron not believing him. Omg, i love charlie so much,i totally feel sorry for him! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox |
| BenquashaFraser 2005-10-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was painfully real. I hurt for them. I'm going to go back and watch the film again well most of it I don't think I want to watch the end. |
| Maeko-Nohara 2005-10-18 ch 1, | abuseI was curious too, and then you write it out perfectly. The characterisation was so accurate that I felt a bit ill. The present tense was good too, I like it when people handle that well. It's good for such an awkward and horrid situation. I have to go watch the movie now. (Yes, this was posted four months ago. I'm going through the lists. This section quite obviously isn't updated very often.) -Mae |
| wild wolf free17 2005-09-18 ch 1, | abuseMagnificent. Sad. Excellent job. |
| TheDepartedFanfictionist 2005-08-08 ch 1, | abuseThis was phenomenal. You took what would be an awkward situation and really captured it well. Each of the students was prefectly in character. I actually have DPS on right now, and am at that part of the movie, and I have to say, your short story really filled in the gaps left by the film. I always did wonder how they all found out, and you've done a nice job of portraying that. Bravo. ~J. |
| IloveRon 2005-06-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is very interesting. I loved it. It makes me so sad though... I always felt the worst for Charlie and Todd. |
| Mae Woods 2005-06-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was amazing. You did it so perfectly. I loved it when Pitts asked, "Are you sure?" because it was so real. Like, what he'd say if it happened in real life. Do you get me? And I liked that when Charlie first found out he went and chain-smoked, while both thinking and trying not to think, because that's exactly what I'd do. Never ever change a single word of this story. Unless of course you wanted to get it published, then you'd have to change the names. Perfect. ~Mae |
| justplaindork 2005-06-07 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Thanks for posting. I was sort of wondering how everyone would react to the news. Very well written. |