Wow. That's was great. But who exactly finds Steve at his house? And when does Lara come in to play? Write more, or I'm forced to kill you!

this is pretty good. but steve died? also you whould mention Aya, not ada from re2. i got messed up there

Ouch...that was harsh. Actually, this was a prologue to the rest of the story. Like on TV, when you watch a little of the show, then you see the credits and the openings.

I dont usualy write negative reports but it seemed like u didnt work very hard on this and its bearly started or finished at all. and what does Steve have to do with this? u didnt even mention Lara or any of the other STARS either. u really need to finish this or start over.

Oh. So that explains how Steve didn't die... and yet, you kill him at the hands of a Maniacal Strangler, or whatever the hell that thing's called.

Wow! This looks REALLY cool! I'm BEGGING youto keep going!