WRITE more!

Supremely sweet. Very well done. Looking forward to reading more of your stuff:-)

loved it!

love ray/neela and love how it took it 2 b april fool's day 2 admit their feelings 4 one anuther!

lol

keep up da gd work!

Well, you know *I* loved it! The characters were spot-on, the dialogue was wonderful, and I loved the Cinderella thing. Great job! :)

This is a good story but why is it rated "FART," YUCK!