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| phantom-jedi1 2007-02-26 ch 1,  | abuseYou have quite the gift for description! I hope to see more of your work soon... phantom_jedi |
| calsax 2005-07-09 ch 1, | abuseWow! You have a masterpiece of fanfiction here. |
| Barzel 2005-06-20 ch 1, | abuseI love ObiWan, and i'm so glad you wrote this! It was long, but it had the right mix of thought and action combined. To get a look into ObiWan's mind- how he's aging, but yet still 'youthful'. Really great writing! It kept my interest. (As well, it was really interesting who you named this story "Pride of the Father". Defiantly in relation to Anakin, but was there some relation to ObiWan as well?) |
| Xrai 2005-06-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery well written.My compliments. |
| Mysterious Jedi 2005-06-06 ch 1, | abuseNice story; not a whole lot of people write non-AU fics about Luke's childhood. < Saved from sin through Christ, MJ |
| ~*green_eyes*~ 2005-06-06 ch 1, anon. | abusewow! This was very well done. I was listening to some sad music when I read this and it just made it a little bit more real. I love the way you made Obi-Wan reflect back apon when Anakin was still alive. I liked the sky hopper chase very much, I think you captured just the right amount of Anakin in Luke. I loved it :) |
| Hedlund (unlogged) 2005-06-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was a very sweet story. It was sad in some ways, but spot on in characterization. It would hurt to think about Anakin, even after such a long time. |
| Mizamour 2005-06-06 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is amazing. You write ObiWan so well, and this is great - I'd always wanted to read a story from ObiWan's perspective in the years between the prequels and last 3 movies. Awesome! |