 OrigamiGirl 2008-11-19 . chapter 1It was very sad but still very beautiful. You did a wonderful job and I have to say that I love your fic. |
 NarutoUchiha2010 2008-09-29 . chapter 1wow..cute♥ |
 Valkyrie Wilde 2008-02-18 . chapter 1Incredible! This is one of the most amazing stories Ive ever read. In all of its complexity, its so simple it almost makes me want to cry. Beautiful writing. |
 KyotheKawaiiOnigiri 2007-11-23 . chapter 1That was very passionate and thought provoking. I love how you developed the characters through the course of the story, and how you relayed Kakashi and Rin's emotions back to the reader. Exceptional. It's pieces like this that make me glad I still read fanfiction. |
 blueis4nightmares 2007-09-09 . chapter 1 wow. thats deep. i mean REAL deep. wow. im in shock here. |
 sasuke1342 2007-07-13 . chapter 1Beautifully written. I have found so many quote worthy lines in there that it's ridiculous. I didn't think it was possible to have a one shot with so much meaning in it. Now I have one question for you, why fifteen?
"She looks so beautiful, so honest, so vulnerable that he doesn't think about his response and only just in time manages to breathe out the word "fifteen"."
Why fifteen? Why not fourteen? Does it matter? I'm curious now... |
 she_universe 2007-06-13 . chapter 1 Oh, oh this is gorgeous and wrenchingly painful in stutters just the way Rin/Kakashi should--had to be because, no, Kakashi doesn't and could never understand love and he could be the one to carry the dead everywhere, always scared and alone and trying to do his duty, always about his duty and this is gorgeous, it really is. |
 self.reliance 2007-05-10 . chapter 1that was the most beautifully tragic thing i have ever read... incredible. you did wonderfully... |
 dong-chun-mei 2007-04-22 . chapter 1Wow... that's all I can say, this is the best naruto story i've ever read |
 Eldr-Fire 2007-04-09 . chapter 1Stories like this one are officially my guilty pleasure. |
 Kwala 2007-02-05 . chapter 1man, that was heartbreaking. very well done story! |
 Draca20 2006-12-29 . chapter 1 Its so powerful, to be honest i've never read anything like it. I could picture everything and feel everything. Its absolutly amazing... If i were an emotional person i'd be crying right now. All i can say is, that you're an excellent writer, keep it up! You'll go far, and trust me... I don't this often! |
 Trespasser1307 2006-12-22 . chapter 1Oh my God. How is it that such a great piece of work has so little reviews? I love your Kakashi/Rin angst, especially the ending! Awesome beyond all reason. Keep writing! Please. |
 PhoenixAngel11 2006-12-08 . chapter 1I had to stop reading that half way through because it was too powerfully written! That was amazing and I truly mean that, I'm brething so heavily it hurts! Well *zoink* favourits *zoink* |
 Legacy of fire 2006-10-05 . chapter 1O_O Wow... just, wow. I can honestly say this is my favorite fanfic (and that's saying something, cause I've read alot). I don't normally like stuff with Kakashi and any kind of pairing, but this was just... so absolutely undeniably amazing. My fav line is:
love is just too far beyond Kakashi’s grasp. He doesn't know how, he doesn't understand why, and he's too afraid to try. |