 riceball 5/27/04 . chapter 1 Actually dances aren't that bad i just talk i don't dance.story good but, you left me hanging or a LONG TIME IN butterflied shaped oringie PLEASE i beg you update son! - I'm dying. |
 Niko 8/7/02 . chapter 1This has to be the best HA! fic I've ever read. Thank you for writting it and giving me faith that Hey Arnold! fics can be as creative and inspiring as this one. |
 Nanashi mlichan 3/15/02 . chapter 1 Ok. I'll admitt that i never read 'Hey Arnold' fanfics, but I was looking for a fic and this was one of the results. I've seen the show and I wanted to know what you'd write about. At first I thought it would be bad, but the more I read- the better it got. It was a good fic that kept me entertained and captivated. Good job. |
 none of your fcking business 12/1/01 . chapter 1 Sorry but your story sux. That lesbian scene sucked and so did the erotic scene, Your story is way 2 depressing lighten up a bit and stop writing pathetic doom and gloom. Your story was also boring. |
 Redhawk 10/3/01 . chapter 1 WOW! most definitly the best hay arnold fic i have ever read! me like the yuri |
 NativeChick15 7/20/01 . chapter 1This was one of the best stories i have ever read it sounds just like highschool |
 eniale8734 7/11/01 . chapter 1I liked it. |
 Jessikah 6/14/01 . chapter 1Awesome story! I LOVE IT! |
 Shorty 6/10/01 . chapter 1 That was wonderful. So many different things going on, all rolled into one story. A sequel would be great, finish all those unanswered questions... - |
 raye hino 5/12/01 . chapter 1 i loved the phobe part! write more. |
 Usagi 5/7/01 . chapter 1 This is very very good! It makes me think of the Hey Arnold series differently. Keep writing more. I wanna read it. If you do write more, let me know. |
 Anne 4/22/01 . chapter 1 I would like to see a sequel to this. I like you're writing style, it's very adult. |
 Amy Winner Barton 4/19/01 . chapter 1LOVE IT!
KEEP THE STOIES COMING! |
 Charlotte's GoOds 4/12/01 . chapter 1What an amazing piece of work... WOW! Keep up the good work! |
 LetoOfDune 4/7/01 . chapter 1Very good writing. This is a very deep story that really takes the feelings that the characters had in past and transformed them into the future. The only real OOC person I could tell (but since this was a future world, I can't really tell), was Arnold. Not that I couldn't believe that he wouldn't go back to Helga in the end, but that he had become a total slacker. That just doesn't feel like the path Arnold should've taken, but I'm not going to complain, because this was your world. All in all, a good story, a great narrator (Brainy rules!), and a twisted look into the future. The Phoebe story was good, a nice chance to see her inner psyche, as she was always my favorite character. You might have developed Nadine a bit more, left out a bit of the Gerald erotica scene, and maybe given a bit more insight to your new characters, but now I'm just nitpicking. A great story with a great ending. Kudos. |