Pointers.
Draco is trying to kill himself. You need much more emotion. feeling. The only part that seems remotely realistic is when he's running from Harry trying to not to cry. The general IDEA is there, but take it from me (I've both been on a ledge and talked someone off of one), there'd be much more depth in real life. There's no way to connect to this the way it's written.

well, what can I say? loved it ;)

This was nice. Funny but sad. Bittersweet. I liked the ending. You didn't dwell too much on their relationship and it was interesting the way you wrote it. Nicely done ^_^

I really liked it! It was a different kind of happy ending. Not one that's corny and fluffy, although I enjoy those too if their not too sugary, but this one's better. Something about it that just fits in with the whole story. You did an awesome job =D

Jade

What a stupid question?? How could you not want the last part? I love this story so much...it's very funny. Update soon!

Aw! That was really sweet and in some parts funny. Awesome

Hey!! This is soo good and so sweet and so funny!! Haha, I love it!!

~xWhit3StaRx

Continue please..

really good. can't wait for more!

Loved the last line!!
Great story, not sure if I really want it to be more than a one-shot though. I'm just really that in love with the last line!! But some H/D heart-to-heart conversations after Harry rescues Draco would be really fun.
Oh, and I love how you managed to make the story witty and amusing without losing any of its angstiness.

Omg haha...I'm pretty sure that was supposed to be a angsty but I found it...hilarious XD hope you don't mind! haha...

--xWhit3Starx

PLEASE! SEQUAL!

You have to continue, it would just be mean if you didn't...and mean people aren't nice now are they?=)...I think you can really get a great story out of it...its a really good start=)...hugs if you continue writing=)

Make a sequel, make a sequel, make a sequel! If you don't, I'll invade your privacy and go through your stuff to find it!

cool. but is this gonna be a hp/malfoy lover story/
lour4^