Aw... A Vi/Mirage friendship! Very creative! It's a love-it, cash-the-check, can't-miss, slam-dunk, vanilla-bean-with-chocolate-chips-frappichino friendship!

wheres the other ch.? cuz this story kix hella **!

Finally an update! ;-)

Wow, great chapter! I like the idea of Mirage in a big sister role...
Your detailed descriptions of what's going on are very interesting, it gives the story a cool vibe.

So, next chapter please!

omg! I love it!! Update soon! PLEASE! Your doing a really great job with this story. Well once again PLEASE update soon!!

SOrry for not reviewing earlier! I don't have alert for this story..but now I do. Great chapter, can't wait for the rest!

I'm totally enjoying this! A road trip heh? It is a very cool idea...
I'm waiting for the next chapter now... ;-o ;-)

Whoa, I would hate to have Mirage stare at me! Is that her super power? By the way, what IS her power? I like the idea of a road trip though! Keep writing!
Over and out,
~StarryTian

That's got to be the best chapter in your story so far! And don't worry, you didn't rush into things. It was perfectly planned out! And you should write more long chapters! They're great!
Over and out,
~StarryTian

AH! I need to know what happens! Whoa, but wouldn't the people around them know that Helen is Mrs. Incredible? I mean, Mirage practically shouted it out! Anyways, keep writing!
Over and out,
~StarryTian

Poor Mirage! I feel so bad for her! Keep writing!
Over and out,
~StarryTian

AW... poor Mirage! Usually, I don't visit the Incredible's section, but your story is just so good! Hm... What's going to happen to Mirage? I really like it, so update soon! Keep writing, 'cause you know I'll be reading!
Over and out,
~StarryTian

I really liked it!! Why did ya tell me it was bad?? It's not bad at all. Okay really. If it was would i fav it?? lol. Anyways i like the idea of how you have Violets B-day thing a ma bobber. i think it will be kool for Vi and Mirage. They could be friends. lol. I really love it and i hope ya update soon!

Very good. You probably wouldn't expect me to be reviewing or readinf a story that wasn't Teen Titans, but I just adore the Increibles movie. Anyway, love the story. Nice thick and rich plot.

-Adding to favorites list-

If you do a good story like this on this movie, I wonder what you could do for Teen Titans :) I have you on my alert list.

-Mint

Hey this is great! I was tense reading the story as I keep hoping that Mirage is not going to turn bad again.
It's very good.
When you write what a character is thinking, one of the ways to do it is to use italics instead of quotes. The reader can then tell the difference between dialogue and thought.
Update soon please! :-)

Hey! This was good, it was really long, but really good! Glad you updated! UPDATE SOON!