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| Shadowed Eternity 2007-11-27 ch 1, | abuseOh my god, oh my god! That was so good! Last year in your garden was definitely the best because it was so original and would have been a very likely scenario if Jack did find out about Laura's deception. I mean, it was Jack's advice for Vaughan to kill Lauren himself as "therapy" so it's quite plausible for Jack to kill his traitorous wife. I loved the 'buried in the backyard'/'skeletons in the closet' idea... it was so creepy yet Jack at the same time. Really loved these snapshots, hope you write more! |
| MariaPurt 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuseHey, your imagination kicks mine LOL:) Anyway, it was nice to read it:) Thanks! |
| Dragonfly Faith 2005-11-14 ch 1, | abuseloved it! I've read a lot of these "5 ways XX died", "% thins ZZ never did" and such, they are very very good. I like how u did this- |
| Eyghon 2005-08-16 ch 1, anon. | abusewow! |
| Agent Pheonix 2005-07-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is OK. Personally, Irina dying scares me a bit. This is very greative though. |
| Dear Aunt Elladora 2005-06-19 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful style & excellently crafted: I enjoyed your exploration of the possibilities. Liked how 1 & 6 linked, but my favorite was 'last year in your garden' for the repetition, the alternate universe, and the brightest flowers over Irina's grave. Thanks for this, you've revived my faith in Alias fanficcing. |
| VickyRyan 2005-06-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery good I liked this story please write more Irina/Jack i love the dynamic between those two characters...V |