sorry bout' that lst reveiw, i had a frickin skrewy day and, yeah... i love your story! it's just you take so long to update! please update, i check this story every day! EVERY DAY YA HEAR?! Ug. well ya now i have nothing to do. exept HW. Good god, i hate home work

WHERE THE F*ING H*LL ARE YOU?!1 THE CLIFFY IS KILLING ME, DAMNIT!

Wow. Just...wow. The last time I read this, I had only gotten through the first two chapters. I didn't know how much I was missing until now!

This fic is epic. Honestly. Your plot is so deep, and the characters are realistic (for video game characters). And your writing itself is awesome. How do you do it? Just HOW do you do it? xD

I especially love the SoKai fluff. It's so cute! And some of the cutest fluff I've seen in a while that involves those two. (I've been a little obsessed with Roxine lately. xP)

So what if this story has been going for 4 years now? I find that admirable, since you haven't given up on it in the least. Your writing certainly shows that. And not to mention the people you have following you. That definitely shows your talent, yes? Well, this story is very well-written, and one of the best KH2 plot stories I've seen in a while. It's believable.

What's also believable is how true you stayed to the Deep Dive/Another Side, Another Story scene. You described it so well, and because I already knew how it played out, I found it easy to follow. You described it perfectly, and the extra parts with how Roxas was feeling during it was just epic on its own.

Great job, hun. Keep up the great work, and keep that motivation. We want to see this story to the end!

Oh, and congrats on your GPA! =)

-iPrincess

U SAY UR ALIVE BUT DONT WRITE ANY THING! COME ON!! WHAT THE HECK! I JUST WANNA READ THE FREAKIN STORY!! AHAHAHHAHAH ok i feel better now sorry bout that... i'm not crazy.

I'm still wiht this story finding well writen fanfic is difcult these days. Remember we all suport you so take all the time you need, alot of fanfics run for much longer the 4 years trust me.

Good to hear you're continuing this story. It's certainly very interesting. I've kept checking on it every now and again ever since I first read it. I'll be looking forwards to new chapters!

i agree with you never give up! Keep going with the story it rocks! :D

Still here, Per!

I know how you feel; I have an epic going that's the exact same way. Best of luck, hon.

-Akiko

omigawd!
she lives! o:
... assuming you are a 'she'?
i assume you are. :)
but tell me if im wrong.
so yeah, there's little me who still
follows your kick-** story...
even though you haven't updated since
the dawn of time but YA KNOW.
im still waiting for that update,
Perhelediel! ;D
and im sure other people still are too,
more than just your two hands.
but i understand, i experience both
technical and mental problems.
they're called 'crap computer' and 'writer's block'
somehow, neither seem that great...
if you get my drift. :)
and yes, i DO want to know how it ends! o:
so yeah.
over and out.
onlylotte.

Hey, I'm one of the readers you can still count on your two hands ^__^ lol I believe in you!

yes please! i really, really, really, really wanna know how it ends. i check every day for updates. ;)

Aw, and I was all excited that there was a new chapter.

BUT, I think that it is wonderful that you are determined to finish this story, no matter what. I know that I, along with all of your other dedicated fans - which is way more than just two hands worth, I hope you know - are and will be thrilled by this story. :D

i love, love, love this story. if it were a man, i'd marry it. if it were a cookie, i'd devour it. thank you so much for writing it. please update soon!

Per, dear! I freaked out when I saw the update thing in my inbox, and read this chapter immediately. Now that I have time, I am reviewing!

Hmm. Riku needs help to pull out his light...
Riku needs a woman. XD
Kidding, kidding. But in all seriousness, do you think he can do it himself? Or will he need assistence from someone more in touch with the light (Princesses of Heart, Sora?) Or, in an even more insane twist, will a person who handles darkness (Cloud?) teach him to deal?

I'm rambling to myself now. Pay no attention. XD

The Deep Dive part was very well-written. You totally captured the dreamlike, superhuman feeling and stayed true to Roxas' voice (the writing style didn't become abstract and unreal, if that makes sense.) It was very interesting to read, and very cool.

I loved the last scene, of course. The Axel / Roxas friendship was a beautiful touch (THEY ARE NOT GAY, ALREADY!) and it's nice to see freakin' BEST FRIENDS, darn it.

On a side note-- have you noticed that especially in fanfiction, if a guy has a girl for a best friend, they always get together? And if a guy has a guy for a best friend, they always get together?

Platonic, people. Learn to love it.

Ahem. I am finished with my anti yaoi-yuri rant now. Sorry 'bout that.

As always, I love your stuff. Don't get discouraged if you get less reviews, Per-- your talent and plot have not decreased in the slightest. They've increased. I feed off reviews, too, and don't worry if you don't get as many. Readers are fickle. XD

Nice GPA, by the way!

-Akiko (insert witty spork-ism here)

WOW O_O...I haven't read the rest of this in a while but...just WOW! Awesome description and plot you have going on here. Very intriguing. PURE AWESOMENESS