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Reviews For: A Night in Iowa

JennCorinthos
2005-10-10
ch 1,
abuseGreat Story...

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uwprincess
2005-07-10
ch 1,
abuseThat was good. I liked that he was angry and then got over it but still ended with the line about backing the wrong guy. I liked when he asked if the other girl could do all the same things that she had done for him. That was a really good idea.
Miran Anders
2005-06-14
ch 1,
abuseNice! I could see this happening, very true to character, and a lovely build to the moment. Thanks! -Miran
Nicole10
2005-06-07
ch 1,
abuseCute
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