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| JennCorinthos 2005-10-10 ch 1, | abuseGreat Story... JENNIFER |
| uwprincess 2005-07-10 ch 1, | abuseThat was good. I liked that he was angry and then got over it but still ended with the line about backing the wrong guy. I liked when he asked if the other girl could do all the same things that she had done for him. That was a really good idea. |
| Miran Anders 2005-06-14 ch 1, | abuseNice! I could see this happening, very true to character, and a lovely build to the moment. Thanks! -Miran |
| Nicole10 2005-06-07 ch 1, | abuseCute |