What a crazy ending! I would have never expected that one. It's kind of funny, yet makes a bit of sense. Good job, man.

nice

Ohh, it's really a very cute story :)
It's full of nice feelings, it makes happy ^_^
Good job !

Kind of a suprise ending :) nice story.

Nice twist about the Guru's son. This is a great story for an ending of a great game

I liked the idea that you came up with, and I like the jokes in there, and I also liked how you made it so Gasper couldn't remember certain things about his past due to being in the end of time, but there are some things I think can be improved on: 1) the subjects in your story were out of character (Not if it were a comedy style story, but you had it under drama which was what I was expecting, so therefore I think it should be under comedy because the story hardly seems dramatic) 2) I understand that the whole thing with Norstein was humorous, but I felt it could have been better. The ending and the whole explanation about Mount Woe was really rushed. I actually think that Magus talking about his mother was the most humorous part. I had a good laugh at his depiction of her.

Awesome story! I loved it. I liked how you gave Gasper a son and made him close to Crono and Magus! I hope to see more of your work soon!