I loved this story. I wish it was longer! I know it's been years since the movie came out but I could read about these characters any time. The way you write them is very true to form. Excellent work.

M, that was very nice. All the familar elements of MbN are in there - need, want, power, manipulation. And of course, kissing. ;) I loved how persuasive Richard was and how he finally broke down Justin's walls only to have Justin find out that he was messing with him. Excellent work.

This is just amazing. I can really see this happening with the characters. They had such slashy chemistry between them in the film. I thought this was beautiful, in a really unique kind of way . I love it.

awsome, i really loved this fic, great job

Woah! Nice twist there at the end. I like this. I just recently saw the film because part of it was filmed in my town. And part of it was filmed in a place about 10 miles away, so it's all pretty tight.

This was great, I loved it. Finally a new MbN fanfic, there are not enough of them out there... Please go on writing!

Yay! A new MBN story! Will you keep writing? I hope so. It's hard to find fanfiction about this adorable couple, but if you choose to keep going, you can rely on this eager reader.

I like dominant Richard very much. The first time I watched the movie I kept expecting for a moment like this to come at any time. It would have been so damn logical!

And I also think Richard loved Justin. In a twisted way, but he did. And I guess Justin loved him back, but as it happens in your story, he just didn't want to realize it.