|Reviews for After the Fire|
| ZoraMalfoy 9/14/11 . chapter 1
Love it! Definitely better than the "Hey! Let's have Roy exile himself in the North away from Riza for awhile, while he waits for Fullmetal!" ending that Conquerors of Shamballa had. Who knows what happened to Roy and the rest of the gang after the movie. Anyways, thanks for the lovely read!
| Ghost of the Crescent Moon 7/31/09 . chapter 1
Wonderful! A beautifically written take on the end of the series.
| FanFictionFanatic 1/24/07 . chapter 1
Sensitive, delicate and well written. A work of art. Simply beautiful.
| OTP 12/10/06 . chapter 1
this was a really sweet fic lovedit keep up the good work
| SapphireSteel 1/20/06 . chapter 1
That is one of the most beautiful fiction I've was very well written, with the relationships flowing naturally and not pushed. It also showed the changed that surely must have occured in Roy. Hope to see more of your work!
| mikarichan 8/5/05 . chapter 1
I've been reading this story like..lets see...how many times...MORE THAN 5 TIMES! it's so nice why don't you make a continuation? i would love that...pwease?
| invisible johnny 6/20/05 . chapter 1
i simply loved it. it was awesome, seriously. no one has actually mentioned the end of the series, so i feel that your story gives the show a, what do you call it, a closure that was missing from before. also you did a great job keeping everyone in character. i can easily say that i look forward to more of your writing, especially if it is about a certain *cough,cough* couple. i really enjoyed your story.
| floofyMiko 6/8/05 . chapter 1
So nice! Beautifully written _
| fireblazie 6/8/05 . chapter 1
Ooh... wow. That was really GOOD. I haven't seen the end of FMA yet, but I've read spoilers. (Of course I have. I heard the words, MAJOR ROY/RIZA AT THE END! and just started digging. XD)
Really, really nice. There was some sort of quality about the story that I just plain loved. Awesome job! )
| Fading wind 6/8/05 . chapter 1
I love it! This is the best fic I've ever read. You must write more fics like this.
| Honeywell 6/7/05 . chapter 1
Every day I feel posessed to come to this site, to this section, and dig through massive amounts of utter garbage, hoping that today may be the day that I finally find a nugget.
This, my friend, is a nugget. The grammar, the spelling, the characterizations... it's so beautiful! Riza's gentle without being a ditz, Roy is emotional but not emo, and it's all so perfect! Thank you for making my day!
My only nitpick though is the tense... I always get a little confused by stories written in the present instead of the past. Just thought I should add that :)
| Zamnandi 6/7/05 . chapter 1
Beautiful story. Everyone is in character, and your version of what happens after it is all over is most definitely plausible... though an honorable discharge would have to take some serious political string-pulling. Besides, no one can resist Royai fluff! _ This might go on my favorites.
| Aru Elric 6/7/05 . chapter 1
I love writers who have a working knowledge of grammar, punctuation and spelling.
| wellduh 6/7/05 . chapter 1
Aww! Great fic.
| AngylLayDying 6/7/05 . chapter 1
All I can say is WOW! I love the description of the story, even if some of it comes from the series. It makes you feel like your really there with them, but describe the people a little more so I can get a feel for what they look like. I watch FMA myself, but I still haven't seen some of these characters. That's all I can really find wrong with this FanFic. Keep up the good work, and I hope to see more chapters if you can!