...that last joke of Yoh's made me think that Hao's rubbed off on his twin more than Yoh knows, it'd have been fun to see his friends reactions to his training, particularly his new attitude, you don't loose you virginity without something changing...*smirks* I just really wish that there was a sequal, it seems as if the stage is being set for but oh well. Great fic any way! *favourites*

Oh my gosh! I really loved this story (age just makes a story even better!) Thank you for the wonderful fanfiction, I love stories with Hao and Yoh. ^__^

I hope there's another chapter to come!

Coul you plz make a sequel?

I loved EVERYTHING.

that was great!

That was amazing. This story's marked complete though...*sighs* I wanted more, but I suppose it could end here as well. Looking forward to more of your writing in the future. And yes, the world's needs more HaoYoh~

I love Hao's teasing/torture. I hope you continue soon

Really cute a stuff, dear^^ It's not very often to run into such a well-done fic. I hope to read more of your work. Thanks for writting it.

That was great. I loved it

i love this story...hao's teasing (or maybe torture) of yoh cracks me up!

I read your story on AFF, so when i saw it here, i had to come fangirl. of all the fanfictions i've read, yours is easily one of the best. Yoh and Hao are IC and their reactions to each other are right in line with their personalities. the storyline is much more cannon than many of the others found here, and you present it in a completely believable way. great job on this story, it is one of my favorites.

Hi, woah this fic is really long, but every word, sentence, and paragraph is really helpful for your story...this is one of the best writings i have encountered in fanfiction...yup that's right one of the best fanfics not just one of the best shaman king fics.


Sigh...I hope I can write like you do...in that case, I won't have a hard time getting high grades in my English class.

BTW, I'm not sure if the fics genre is romance/humor-I just think that it's more like romance/drama, especially with the way Hao is treating Yoh.

Is there anymore? -poke- oh well even if there isn't that was still a great place to end off. i really liked it :)

he added yoh into the picture, didnt he? oh he loves him! he just doesnt realize it!