Really good. Really felt like River.

This definitely has the unique River touch to it. Strange, yet not so much if you really think about it. Excellent job.

wow great story. it really show how logical and yet not logical rivers mind is

Interesting thoughts...I personally think that Jayne will eventually show a softer side (someone that devoted to his mother and siblings must have one) and be the one that River chooses (no, I don't think that he'll have much of a say in it). That is, if they decide to make the next movie...

I really liked this, which surprised me because I'm not the world's biggest River fan. But it was incredibly well-written, truly in character, and basically exactly what I would have thought in each of those circumstances. I loved describing her feelings towards kissing Book as "squiggly", but I especially loved the Mal bit because it was just so Mal. And Kaylee, because "Kaylee tastes sweet, like gum or strawberries." Nice fic- this is going on my favs.

VERY nice! This story is so well written and very thought provoking. I could definitely see River thinking about her relationships with the crew and how they would kiss her. Nicely done; keep up the great work! :)

Aw, what a lovely little oneshot. Sweet and very sexy at the same time.
(for me - gum and strawberries, every time :P)

Wow. Just wow. I absolutly loved this. Its beautiful and original,imaginative and sweet. Perfect. It was a wonderful idea and you wrote it amazingly. You made me feel it. That's a talent.
Please keep writing!
Sugarburn

This is so beautiful and so sweet. Nicely done :)

Wow! Lovely introspective!

/This/ is glorious. I've always seen a dichotomy in River's actions, and you have captured it perfectly.

Good job. This was very fascinating, almost mesmerizing. No one knows what really goes o in River's head, but I think your theory is a good one.

That was deep, sensual, and interesting. Good job.

I read this on Glow and loved it. I have to admit, my favorites are the ones with Jayne and Kaylee.
Nice Job!

wow, I am impressed that was very good. Since you labeled it as a first chapter I hope you post more.