Woot woot!! That was an awesome ending, good job with Sara's closure. I loved it.

something new eh? Can't wait!

That was good-really good. You made it very real and honest ...and the feelings were the same!

I love that Gris was there for her...and that Sara knows he always will be.

Great story-thanks for the trip! Looking forward to more!

That was very good-I love that Gris knew to open up
and let Sara spill it all.

And his comforting her-that was so sweet and loving.

Great updates-thanks!
Now what?:)

Woot woot! I had a bit of catching up to do. But that was a wicked good...6 chapters.

Wow, Sara pregnant? Would have never thought of that!

Terrific job.

Oh my god. I'm hysterical. I feel like you wrote portions of that story about my life, and upsetting as it was to read, it was wonderful. You captured Sara in such an amaing way... in a way that makes it seem real. I only wish I had a Grissom to go to, and explain exactly as Sara did, my abortion and how it's screwed with my life.

I love this, I really do. I hope you continue this fic, as it has more and more potential each time you post a new chapter.

I love it. The story is great.update soon. plz.

Well, if there are more chapters like this one in your head, I'd just let the dust pile up and continue writing :-)

Aw...so good! Now Griss can offer...'comfort'! ;P
Anyhow, I'm really enjoying this, so please update soon!

Awesome fic!!

LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON!~

omg plz up date soon plz up date like right now

that was so mean to end it there lol plz more

oH! Hurry up! I wanna know! God, grissom isn't the only one that wants to know what she's talking about...

This is lovely. Please update soon!

Another nice chapter!

Because I see a lot of promise here, I'm going to hand out a little constructive criticism here. I think this story would be even better if you expanded the chapter length. It's true that quality is better than quantity, but your chapters are so short that your readers can't get themselves completely entranced by your writing, as good as it is. I'd also like to suggest you find a beta to edit your story, and help point out certain areas/ideas that can be added and improved to make your story truly spectacular. If you'd like, my email address is in my profile, and I'd be more than happy to offer my beta services to you.

Again, I think this story is really good, and has every chance of being completely spectacular. I really think this is nice work, and hope you update soon!

~GDR

Nice opener! Hope you update soon.