you should continue - i wanna know whats guna happen...

i hope atleast one of them live and how comes you dont use names?

anyway good luck with the next chapter...

x

*grins* Oh, you most deffinately need to do a second chapter and as many as you need to do to finish this story.

I think you should write on to ch.2 it was good so far.

Hey I liked this story, I think that you should continue it, it could rea;;y turn out good.

you better should!

Definately a chapter two. It was a really great start. I can't wait to see Cath/Sara. One thing it would be easier to read if you formatted better. The whole story wouldn't be one big paragraph. Please continue with or without using my suggestion.

x-sara-x

plz update soon the suspense is killing me, i realy need to know what happens next

Say it with me sweetheart; formatting, formatting, formatting. Oh lord, formatting.

Wow nice start and yay another C/S writer! That's always good.

Angelique

It's angsty and good. You should write a second chapter or more... Good work!

wow i love the story cant wait for the rest of it

Yes please continue.

Good start...plase go on and update soon.