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| Michi the Mischevious 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuse*grins* Oh, you most deffinately need to do a second chapter and as many as you need to do to finish this story. |
| lewiscentral 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuseI think you should write on to ch.2 it was good so far. |
| Darkdragonferal 2005-07-04 ch 1, | abuseHey I liked this story, I think that you should continue it, it could rea;;y turn out good. |
| akc23 2005-06-23 ch 1, | abuseyou better should! |
| x-sara-x 2005-06-16 ch 1, | abuseDefinately a chapter two. It was a really great start. I can't wait to see Cath/Sara. One thing it would be easier to read if you formatted better. The whole story wouldn't be one big paragraph. Please continue with or without using my suggestion. x-sara-x |
| Flyaway12 2005-06-11 ch 1, | abuseplz update soon the suspense is killing me, i realy need to know what happens next |
| yen raaki 2005-06-11 ch 1, | abuseSay it with me sweetheart; formatting, formatting, formatting. Oh lord, formatting. |
| Nepeace 2005-06-10 ch 1, | abuseWow nice start and yay another C/S writer! That's always good. Angelique |
| Crazy Mokis 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseIt's angsty and good. You should write a second chapter or more... Good work! |
| LeosWife 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abusewow i love the story cant wait for the rest of it |
| Daisyangel 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseYes please continue. |
| HopeGrace - MLH 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseGood start...plase go on and update soon. |