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| majit 2006-04-01 ch 1,  | abusethis story is brilliant, perfect, well-written, in character. |
| just hidden 2005-12-11 ch 1, | abusethe colin bit was amazing. great job. wonderful read. |
| princetongirl 2005-09-16 ch 1, | abuseLOVED IT UPDATE SOON |
| ProFfeSseR 2005-06-12 ch 1, | abuseWow!! Very well written! |
| smile1 2005-06-09 ch 1, | abuseHey, To be honest I don't usually read stories that revolve around Luke or Lorelai, but because it was you I decided to take the dive anyway and it was worth it. I thought the interaction between Lorelai and Logan was really well done and in character, though my favorite part had to be the small piece of dialogue between Colin and Logan. Bye, smile :-) |
| pokey 2005-06-09 ch 1, | abuseYou did an amazing job with the Lorelai-Logan confortation, I am so impressed. It was seriously like watching the show but with less pop culture refences. Wonderful, I wish this wasn't a one shot because I would love to read more. |
| K 2005-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh man, that was really good. Very intense and well done. Your writing was very good also. As much as I liked it, I don't think you should write a sequel--just leave it as a one-shot. That being said, if you wrote a sequel I would definetly read it! |
| KatrinaLeigh 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseNice! I really like this story. Very in character. |
| KeitaWolf 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseVery realistic - very in character. Loved it. Nicely done. |
| Anwa 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseNice story. Decent writing, good, solid idea. I would have prefered, however, if you just left it at the scene where Lorelai and Logan are talking. I think that's really the beauty of one shots, you can leave so much up in the air and let the readers draw their own conclusions about things. Anyways, keep up the good work. I'll be sure to check out if you write more things. Hugs and kisses. |
| Gilmore Fan 2005-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw poor lorelai!! atleast she has luke ^_^! but ya im soo mad at rory, stupid thingto do dropping out of yale |
| LandonLover 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseFantastico! But of course, you knew that. :) Loved that you kept "I don't need your daddy's money." Too funny. :) Can't wait for more stuff from you... :-* |
| Colleen 2005-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow sad--but something that could and would so happen on the show...where has normal Rory gone?! REally nicely written though |
| serendipity112233 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abusethis was really sad! But really good! |
| crissy 2005-06-07 ch 1, | abusegreat fic! i love that lorelai didn't give in and try to make nice. her baby girl is flipping out and acting all out of character and he is what is new in her life. i'd be suspicious and mean too. it was a good piece. |