An enjoyable story about Mei. Keep writing

this grabbed me from start to finish, what a way for this all to end

wow. that was really cool. although i wasn't very fond of the last sentence. i think that i was kindof disappointed about it because everything else seemed like it had a poetic feel to it, when suddenly "...she raised her head, only to see Wind and Leo still fighting". I guess it'd give that reality "umph", but hey, I wouldn't really know. :D

more? please?

That was pretty good. You should continue this. Maybe when she's supposedly dead again at the end, she wakes up again to be with Wind.

Cool. Not my favorite. But cool.

a very nice storyline. the only things i have criticism on is a little bit on your writing style. At the beginning of the story i was a little confused about where this was going on...until about the last line when i realized that it was set in Mei's head. maybe in your summary you should mention that so other reader's aren't confused as well. Another thing is the way some of the sentences were worded. like the sentence, "she had already forgotten her death, for that is what happens when you die." kinda awkwardly put. also with the part, "No one knows it, but when you die..." you should maybe revise that or explain it a little differently so it doesn't sound like a report and have it flow more with the oneshot. otherwise, it's a very nice story. keep writing, you'll be even better with time. Kudos! n__n

you little punk, where is the rest huh where damn you ill get you aha uha wahhahhahhahhash(crying). anyways u are a creative punk but very short attention span you wrote only one measely page. well i doubt it will actually submit and you are probably dead by now or old and never visit this page or perhaps you have forgotten this brief foray into this particular movie on fanfiction but anyways, that is life.
Sincerely,
Mei's Spirit #345 heaven cell 234 next to Johnny Carson

P.S. The guy is hilarious

That movie was so sad. I still can't get over the ending...*sniff.

The story was pretty good, set in the same style as the film.

i dont think it sucks, maybe a bit more description though. i like this whole death idea thoug.

nO THAT WAS GOOD, i LOVE THAT MOVIE, AND ITS NICE TO SEE YOUR IDEAS! VERY GOOD, AND KINDA SPOOKY, KEEP WRITING! X

wow, i like thus story. also if u could do me a favor and read my stories too? I like this story please continue it!

interesting...*sigh* i love that movie...i think it was good. nice job. *sniff*

is that all you are going to do comeonkeep writing itwas verygood. So it didnt suck;)

Hey..this can't be a one shot...no! So continue! ...NOW!
I love it!
-Avey