That was a great ending for this chapter. lol. Cool story :)

Not going to lie, I thought this chapter's ending was really anticlimactic. And disappointing. More so than the Astronomy Tower scene in the latest HP movie.


I can't believe Squall just took that in stride.

But hey, what good are compliments without criticisms?

Actually, before I am submitting this review, I am reading a bit of the next chapter to see if Rinoa gets called out for being a coy **, but I guess not.

Regardless of my personal feelings towards this recent plot development, it is well written, just not agreeable to me.

That's horseshit.

She's the one that is being coy when she has a boyfriend, and ** him, too. She doesn't have much justification for getting pissy at Squall.

But, I'm not angry at you, I'm angry at Rinoa, you're just the author, making a plot, she's the character.


Very good, though.

I feel like this is a movie so far, and I LOVE it.

love it. keep up the good work

I love this story and how your out of character Squall still makes the story interesting. I can't wait for your next update!

I. Freaking. Love. This.

Seriously, this story is simply amazing! You are an amazing writer, witty and funny and this story is simply amazing. I’ve been laughing so hard at times I’ve had tears in my eyes. I love Corealie. She’s so hilarious and dramatic and she reminds me of one of my friends. Except my friend isn’t as dramatic as Corealie.

I’m in love with this story. It’s seriously one of the best FF VI stories I’ve ever read, even though it doesn’t really have anything to do with FF VI except for the characters. But it’s amazing. I love how cocky Squall gets and how he freaks out Rinoa, it’s so cute! x3 But even though their a bit OOC I still love how you have them act, since if Squall was a brooding emo kid and Rinoa was the one always making a move, it’d get kind of lame. So I love how you made Squall such a smart-** and Rinoa a kind of shy but really funny and smart girl. And then Corealie, who is an amazing comic relief. Seriously, everyone in this story is so funny! Well, almost everyone since Ashley isn’t that great. But I simply adore this story! =)

So I love this story, and you realy need to update soon! I seriously can’t wait to see what happens next! So please update soon! I’m begging you! Pretty please with a cherry on top?

~Nova

your story is AWESOME

lol @: Corealie sniffs, “You’re a **.”

Rinoa raises an eyebrow, “What?”

“True story.” Her cousin concludes

...totally reminds me of Barney from How I Met Your Mother

LOL.. hilarious!

sort of miss the quotes and songs... they really help with the direction of the story

but I don't really mind, as long as you keep on updating !!

This story is absolutely fantastic. It is written in such a mature fashion that it really stands out among other stories on this site. The characters are realistic and you do an amazing job of really explaining their wants and needs which is so important in a romantic story. I seriously just can't get over how you've written these character. You've evolved them far beyond characters from a video game and have really given them faces just dripping with personality. A truly amazing story. Hope there's more to come soon.

ROFL !!

love love love it!! rinoa's a cute drunk =)
hahah, i can't wait for the morning-after.

JUSTICE FINGERS !!

(pow! pow! pow!)

Excellent chapter.

I have to feel sorry for Squall, there in lies the problem of being the only sober member of the party.

Even so, it seems that things didn't go that badly...well, apart from his moments with Rinoa being interrupted.

I wonder, what will everyone do in the harsh light of morning?

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

Thank you for updating...just...thank you. I love this story so much

I like the reference to her drunkenness to a camera speed of 30, hehe. ooh, Squall sounded so sexy there.

and just when we finally think that things are rolling, alcohol gets the better of her stomach, still hilarious though