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Reviews For: A Torturous Journey

death-on-arrival
2006-05-02
ch 1,
abuseYou can´t to this. I`m so scared of spiders. I just have to think about them and I´m flipping out! You´re torturing me there!
Other than that, great story! :-)
karmine
2006-01-21
ch 3,
abuseplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzpzlplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzpzlplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplz update soon i really really really want to know what happens! this story is so so so going on my favs list! it is a totally one of the great storys!
InuIceWolf
2005-12-30
ch 3,
abusePoor poor Greg. I hope the others find him soon.. Update soon please.
pistonsgirl13074
2005-06-16
ch 3,
abusehey great story! please update soon!
a writer of fics
2005-06-13
ch 3,
abuseCome on that was a really short chapter. Please update really soon, and make the next chapter a little longer.
linschickrule101
2005-06-13
ch 3,
abusekeep going! this is getting interseting! keep it up!
Princess Artemis
2005-06-12
ch 3,
abuseUnpleasant premise to say the least!

Anyway, it's always a good idea to start a new paragraph with each new speaker; it makes it easier to understand and read that way.
IDoNotJudge
2005-06-12
ch 3,
abusePoor Greg. :( POST SOON! ugh my sis is ** me off so i have to go in a different room to see CSI. POST MORE THIS ROCKS!
Alliegh Taylor
2005-06-10
ch 2,
abuseYou should DEFINITLEY add something with spiders, just to make this story as horrific as possible. I love it already, and usually, it takes me a while to get hooked to a story. Awesome story, and I can't wait until you add more! :-D
linschickrule101
2005-06-09
ch 2,
abuseyet another great chapter, can't wait to see what will happen
lovesdigsdmanded
2005-06-09
ch 2,
abuseoh... i like that... another greg angst fic with a bit of torture... interesting... pls update soon...
IDoNotJudge
2005-06-08
ch 1,
abuse*Shudders* I hate chinese water torture, my sister did that to me, ugh lol POST SOON! Poor Greggo, he's so hot...AHH! Where did that come from!? lol POST SOON!
Hyper-Gurl1
2005-06-08
ch 2,
abuseMe likey! It's suspensful!! Poor Greg! Here's a cookie for ur hard work *gives u a cookie*
Scifi-warper
2005-06-08
ch 1,
abuseHey, leave Greggo alone! Gr. I hope everyone saves him soon. Nice tip off to Grave Danger by the way. Update.
linschickrule101
2005-06-08
ch 1,
abusethis was really good, hope to see more soon, can't wait!
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