Hi,

After watching most of the 10th Kingdom recently, I decided to go searching for fic. I came across yours and since it was finished, decided to check it out.

I really enjoyed it. You told an interesting story that kept me hooked. I liked the voices you had for everyone (especially because some people tend to overuse certain "Wolf-isms". I thought the ending was a bit ... quick. Snow White showing up to transport Virginia back to the castle was a bit deus ex machina for me. But other than that, I really enjoyed the read.

I don't know if you'll ever get this or if you even still write but if you ever decide to write again, I'd love to read more.

-Chi

please write more i loved it all and want to know more i love it and want to know what happens next in the story

heya.great story. ur'z iz da 1st fanfic i EVA read. i read it on some site, dat i can't remember da name of, bout a year ago! i would luv 2 c a sequel. :)

please get bak 2 me.

Zebidee

I really liked this story. It was sweet and well written. And I loved the ending. It inspired me to continue my own 10th Kingdom fan fiction.

Keep up the good work, and I can't wait to read your other stories.

This story was so cool. I couldnt stop reading it and the ending was totally good. An excellent story hope to see you writing more :-)

That was a very awesome story. I love it!

It kicks!



U

What a wonderful story! And you used all the elements from the movie: the swamp witch, the iron shoes, and the Peeps. The story left me in so much suspense that I couldn't stop reading. Great job! I hope that you will continue the story so I can find out what Ann Peep has planned for Virginia.

This story is just GREAT! I loved each part of it. Wolf's and Virginia's never-ending love being the strongest. Getting rid of the swamp witch. This was very well written. Good work. I hope to read more stories. How about writing a sequel to this one? Let's see what would Ann do. Once again, good work!

that was a really good story! i'm putting it under my fav stories list. i luv wolf and i luv torture, so this was the best mix. this is the gr8est story ever!
dstrbd child

What? No sequel? Excellent story. You had my hanging on your every word for a while there. Completely excellent!

whoops, sorry Natters, I knew I'd got that smelling a sequel thing from somewhere and I thought it was clever so I used it... umm, well, imitation IS the sincerest form of flattery :/ Sorry!

Do I smell a sequel coming on here? :) I really liked your fic, it sounds like you put a lot of thought and effort into coming up with the plot and making it all fit together. Good job, and keep ut the good work!

Oooo, sequel op? Anywho, I really loved the fic! You have inspired me to write 10th Kingdom fics!

I smell a sequel coming on! This was fab!

OMG! That was so good! It took me 6 hours to read, but it was worth it! You did wonderfully in describing everything, I could see it all as you wrote it! Wow you've got talent! GREAT JOB!

Love ya-EBS