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| Bagge 2005-11-15 ch 1,  | abuseAh! How perfect. Happily ever after indeed. Again this could have been about so many couples that are in love (even if there is a certain clue in theír coloring). Beautiful! |
| Milky 2005-10-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. A Hermione/Draco thing... Can't really imagine both of them getting together, because Draco's words were so vehement. But there is a lot of potential in plot development if they actually get together haha. |
| Lizzy Weasley 2005-06-26 ch 1, | abuse*wonders how often a person can post the same review* (referring to anonymous's reviews) Don't take that review from "La" seriously! It's always very easy to insult other people if you yourself are not as talented as they are! But I have to agree with Treehugger: please make your fics a bit longer! You could add more descriptions and so on! But I really like your story (again)! :-) Lizzy |
| Honeycups 2005-06-11 ch 1, | abusei really liked that candy cane thing... it's so true. Good story! |
| ~Treehugger 2005-06-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really liked this fanfic :). Very sweet and nicely written. It could do with some more dialogue/text in general, since it's so short... it would be so much better if it was longer. |
| Anonymous 2005-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseLa, I don't mean to be rude, but please get a life. There is a saying that goes, 'If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say it.' And, also, if you're going to write a hate review, please use proper grammar/spelling. Also, I believe the correct term is 'laptop'. And whoever you took the 'lab top' from can sue you. Just a fact. And, Cleo, sweetie, your story rocks. Don't listen to this 'lab top' stealer. |
| Anonymous 2005-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseLa, I don't mean to be rude, but please get a life. There is a saying that goes, 'If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say it.' And, also, if you're going to write a hate review, please use proper grammar/spelling. Also, I believe the correct term is 'laptop'. And whoever you took the 'lab top' from can sue you. Just a fact. And, Cleo, sweetie, your story rocks. Don't listen to this 'lab top' stealer. |
| Anonymous 2005-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseLa, I don't mean to be rude, but please get a life. There is a saying that goes, 'If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say it.' And, also, if you're going to write a hate review, please use proper grammar/spelling. Also, I believe the correct term is 'laptop'. And whoever you took the 'lab top' from can sue you. Just a fact. And, Cleo, sweetie, your story rocks. Don't listen to this 'lab top' stealer. |
| Anonymous 2005-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseLa, I don't mean to be rude, but please get a life. There is a saying that goes, 'If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say it.' And, also, if you're going to write a hate review, please use proper grammar/spelling. Also, I believe the correct term is 'laptop'. And whoever you took the 'lab top' from can sue you. Just a fact. And, Cleo, sweetie, your story rocks. Don't listen to this 'lab top' stealer. |
| Anonymous 2005-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseLa, I don't mean to be rude, but please get a life. There is a saying that goes, 'If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say it.' And, also, if you're going to write a hate review, please use proper grammar/spelling. Also, I believe the correct term is 'laptop'. And whoever you took the 'lab top' from can sue you. Just a fact. And, Cleo, sweetie, your story rocks. Don't listen to this 'lab top' stealer. |
| Anonymous 2005-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseLa, I don't mean to be rude, but please get a life. There is a saying that goes, 'If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say it.' And, also, if you're going to write a hate review, please use proper grammar/spelling. Also, I believe the correct term is 'laptop'. And whoever you took the 'lab top' from can sue you. Just a fact. And, Cleo, sweetie, your story rocks. Don't listen to this 'lab top' stealer. |
| A person who is annoyed at ... 2005-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseLa, I don't mean to be rude, but please get a life. There is a saying that goes, 'If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say it.' And, also, if you're going to write a hate review, please use proper grammar/spelling. Also, I believe the correct term is 'laptop'. And whoever you took the 'lab top' from can sue you. Just a fact. And, Cleo, sweetie, your story rocks. Don't listen to this 'lab top' stealer. |
| A person who is annoyed at ... 2005-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseLa, I don't mean to be rude, but please get a life. There is a saying that goes, 'If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say it.' And, also, if you're going to write a hate review, please use proper grammar/spelling. Also, I believe the correct term is 'laptop'. And whoever you took the 'lab top' from can sue you. Just a fact. And, Cleo, sweetie, your story rocks. Don't listen to this 'lab top' stealer. |
| A person who is annoyed at ... 2005-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseLa, I don't mean to be rude, but please get a life. There is a saying that goes, 'If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say it.' And, also, if you're going to write a hate review, please use proper grammar/spelling. Also, I believe the correct term is 'laptop'. And whoever you took the 'lab top' from can sue you. Just a fact. And, Cleo, sweetie, your story rocks. Don't listen to this 'lab top' stealer. |
| la 2005-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abusehm... you seem like a wanabe writter... just thought id tel l you, i think u tried to be "deep" but to be honest the story sucked, it wasn't even a story. its like "they both hated each other, but all of a sudden where in love" aww, so cute. All u did was add fancy words, sorry to say, but that was just a bunch of silly words mixed together. Learn to write. then some REAL people can apreciate ur work, not some losers who acctually read these for fun, i read urs caz i stole this guys lab top. Bastard. Here, I will writ e a story maybe you can apreciate: Cammie walked across the street, she met a girl, this girl was lesbian, but was carrying her brothers baby. Cammie took her to the hospital, and the magical nurse cured her. she was no longer lesbian, no longer had her brothers baby, and no longer knew how to talk to people who walked across the street. The End Happy? Send an email to to thank me. Love ya lesbo! Lala |