Great.

Great.

Must stop reading and do my work, but before I reluctantly close the window until later, I had to take the time to tell you what I thought. This story is engaging and addicting. It quickly pulls you in. I adore history and obscure references to them even more, so this story is a very rare treat for me. And Harry having all these powers but yet isn't suddenly some cliche all seeing all knowing GOD is very refreshing. I like Harry being super powerful and having rare abilities, but suddenly being able to take on Voldemort, Dumbledore, Superman and the American Navy in one breath is getting really really old.
I would spend hours gushing about this story but I haven't finished the story yet and I really need to get to work. *sigh* My job always takes away my reading fun. LoL
I am sure you will be rolling your eyes when I send another one of these waxing poetic about every little detail and annoying you to no end gushing about how much I loved it.
Speaking of poetic... the little poems at the end of each chapter are too cute. I am smiling before I even read the first word. I love them!

eh? what just happened?!

wow i like how you have harry being in certain places during historical events, or him being the inadvertent cause of certain events. i wonder who offed jones...CIA probably...

ahh now we now why Draco was there and I'm looking forward what happens now.

did you do the 600,0 thing purposely...That's pretty impressive to be able to get your story that long AND make it a nice perfect round number. Did you add or delete words or sentences in the authors notes to make it such a nice number? I don't think I ever finished the story. I remember getting to around 17 when I realized the story was going very very slowly and you had this urge to explain every little detail, which made the reader just get lost in the words and eventually get bored. Resulting in the plot advances being few and far between. But that must have been 3 years ago... I may enjoy the onslaught of words now...who knows. I was randomly browsing authors profiles when I saw your story pop up in a persons favorites. I was like wow I remember that...then I saw the 600,0

Chapters: 40 - Words: 600,0

And I was like holy shit I gotta comment on that...that can't just be a coincidence. It must have been slightly above or below by like a few thousand words and you just fixed certain things that didn't need to be said...like authors notes or just random details that just went overboard...like holy shit man. My eyes bugged out...now if only you have an even number of reviews to and just somehow not allowed people to review anymore...that would be even more impressive...you can delete peoples reviews i think...just keep it at a 20, I bet reviews in the 300 area don't really mean much. I am assuming the 1st 100 and when you first broke 10 and 20 mean something...but having a perfect 20 with 40 chapters and a 600,0 words would be really legit...lol hahaha anyway this is really a useless review, but I couldn't help myself.

nice first meeting between Harry and Malfoy, I think they won't become friends here either *g*

I've read all night I've read all day and I'm just now reaching chapter eleven...awesome.

Strange start, but I think I will read a bit more before I decide if I like it or not.

I'm just ... wow.
After having finished this story, I have to admit that I haven't been absorbed that ... thoroughly by a fanfiction (or it's universum) in a long time.
You have a mighty Harry without ridiculing him, everything there seems reasonably developed. I especially loved the historical aspects (actually, anything that takes action further than the British wizarding world, e.g. the wizarding culture of Japan, ...) and Technomancy/the fusion of muggle and wizarding science (again, a greater picture). And the whole mind theory is ... well, let's just say that I appreciate it - a lot ;)
Another interesting aspect in that category is internationalism:
Harry's friends are: A swiss physicist, an English physician, a Kurd farmer turned veterinary surgeon, a Japanese martial artist, a British spy, ... They are very different from each other, creating a very (that should be in italics) interesting mix.

And I really loved Harry's aliases - every one of them, my personal favourite being (of course) Jerry Homest.

That said, I should praise you for your writing style as well. Only the occasional typo, correct grammar and sentence structure, wide vocabulary, something you don't find everyday at . I'm really curious wether you have (a) beta(s) helping you, because there are no inconsistency whatsoever in your story.

One thing you can improve though is missing words. There were several passages where I thought the sentence was incomplete. I can't name them now, as I read most of the story in one go and the chapters are rather large (another thing I really liked), but, rest assured, they exist. They don't impede understanding, but out of sheer perfectionism, I had to mention them ;)

Now I'll see if I can find another story of yours that can measure up to this one - I greatly enjoyed it and it's definitely one of my favourite storys ever.

Keep it going *cheers*

themysterioustickingnoise

Truly, this story was brilliant, but I think it might have been better if you left out the final bit with Susan. Yes, I understand that Susan is still fond of Harry, but she's young and her reaction to Blake saving her shows that she couldn't have been that torn up, even if he was the same person originally. She could have plausibly moved on with her life without Blake.
The same goes for the final chapter, my willing suspension of disbelief shattered during that. The idea was originally to show what happened afterward in an attempt to wrap up any loose ends, yes? What you succeeded in doing was taking a likeable character and twisting his personality to extremes in a way that it likely would have never occured.

Alltogether, though, this story was an enjoyable read. Thanks for writing it.
~Key

Story's good so far...
Except I personally don't like Ron that much... :( And he seems to be replacing Harry in the canon...

this was very impressive...i think it was a bit long though...
great job anywho!

I think I have been so late in reviewing this story... Nevertheless...
First things first, I like your story. The way you write is good... A few of the scenes can be made shorter to keep the story taut... But it's good even in this format...
Anyway, I was starting to think this is too much of a superHarry from the last couple chapters...
And I come here, he actually becomes Godlike...
Well... I'll see what happens next...