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| vanillalilies 2005-12-16 ch 1,  | abuseoh this is a really good story. I liked how Ron took the blame for everthing. It was a well written chapter! Please update soon! |
| HeavenelyAngel02 2005-08-26 ch 1, | abuseHm...interesting. I certainly like how you started this fic. The humor anf fluff you displayed was also good. Anyways I'm sure you're other chapters will be just as good, please update soon. |
| Gennai's Apprentice 2005-07-30 ch 1, | abuseFinally, I knew you had it in you, and a great story to boot. I'm excited to see what happens next. |
| WesUAH 2005-06-21 ch 1, | abuseLiked that one. Excellent characterization, especially for Monique. Poor Ron, always so misunderstood... You've got a pretty good setup here, and I look forward to the next chapter. Great writting, and a fair sight better than I was at 17. Keep it up. |
| COOL 2005-06-09 ch 1, anon. | abuselove this, storie. ps. chapter2 please? |
| kemiztri 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseThat was not bad at all. I liked it very much. So much humor and fluff. Brilliant for a first fic. And if you did this well for the first chapter, I'm sure the succeeding chapters will be better and better. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon. |
| aimtbj 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseWow, I'd have to say that is one of the best post-movie fics I've read. It really does the moments after justice. And it's not even over! Keep updating please! |
| Caiyne 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseNot bad, not bad at all. You were spot on with personalities, and Kim and Ron's return to her house was perfection. "Pleasedon'tkillme" Hillarious, I can totally see Ron doing exactly that. The ending, what with the mysterious figure and all, was very nicely done. I found myself feeling apprehensive, y'know, really wanting to know what the deal was with all the conspiracy talk. I can't think of a single thing I didn't like about this story, and I eagerly await the next installment. A most impressive break-in to KP fanfiction. |
| Spitfire F.22 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is gonna be good. With a start like that, I can't wait to see how you handle what's comming next. Everybody's perfectly in character. |
| Cardcaptor Raa'Shaun 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is a pretty good start ^_^ It's easy to read, has the characters acting naturally as far as I can see, and I'm liking the way the plot is going so far. Keep up the good work! |