I love the ending. it made me cry. im actualy a big veronica mars fan. j'ai aime la fin. Ca ma fait pleurer. je suis actuellement une fan de Veronica Mars.

i read the story and i was amazed!

I really enjoyed this story. Didn't think I would but I was hooked from the start.

Very good story. Loved it.

I love this story! i just wanted to tell you that in this chapter there was one minor mistake... the last sentence you wrote Lily instead of Riley. he was driving her to Alicia's not his niece.

Okay, so I have to stop here and read the rest of this tomorrow, but I have to tell you, it's an interesting premise. I like it. And I like how a lot of events are playing out so far. But to tell you the truth, while reading this, all I want to do is write the whole thing over with even a basic sense of grammar. It's killing me. If I weren't merely skimming it to lessen the exposure, I would have stopped mid-chapter one. Please, please, get a beta reader and edit this thing.

This was a great fic.

Hey... also muss gleichmal vorweg sagen: Großartige Story! Hab sie in einer Nacht gelesen - konnte einfach nicht weggehen! Wie manche bereits gesagt haben, das Ende war etwas eilig, aber trotzdem fand ich die ganze Story einfach nur klasse - Die Charaktere waren überzeugend geschrieben und die Idee war auch unique. Großes Lob von mir :) Hoffe bald wieder mal was von dir lesen zu können!!

Hmm...Other than the grammar i found nothing disturbing...well what can i say the development of the story was amazing for a while i was on the edge of my seat anticipating what will happen but a little bit of disappointment came when the trial began and logan n veronica fought again...i think you had a good build up but the climax came too soon..the impact of the proposal was dulled by the whole trial...thats just me...but overall i'd say i'll give you a 7 out of 10 cause i just didn't find the ending you know a mind blower. Great work!

When I began reading this I didn't think that Veronica would ever take any abuse. I still don't but I like this fic. Please write again!

OMG, I just noticed that you actually did continue your story. I reviewed it on saying that I'd love to read more. And here I come and find the whole story ^^
I'm immediately going to read it now

AWESOME story. Keep it going if you can.

I thought this was a really good story. :)

omg the end? I can't believe it.

It went all to quickly like 30 seconds was practically a second or something of the like.

Still, it was very sweet. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work :)

Yea, it was a bit short but as long as it ends happy, I'm happy. Thanks for writing this fic, it was great!