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| topsy910 2006-01-06 ch 1, | abusehi i just wanted to say this story is amazing! keep writing other stories because ill definitely read them! I like these stories which are centred around the characters' pasts because we're never to sure what happened to them...so good job! |
| microgirl 2005-08-15 ch 1, | abuseThis was excellent! I could see this play out like an actual episode. Written very well. |
| Lanta 2005-08-15 ch 8, | abuseAnother good story... got to say, your version of Laura Sidle reminds me so much of Irina from Alias... anyway, definately enjoyed reading it. |
| drakien 2005-06-20 ch 8, | abuseThis was fantastic! I totally adored it. Can we PLEASE have a sequel? If we're really good? Pretty please w/ sugar on top? |
| tarrabeena 2005-06-19 ch 8, | abuseOh God ! amazing! I've got butterflies in my stomach and have lost the ability to form a cohearent sentence. It was just the most perfect chapter. |
| spongebob 2005-06-19 ch 8, anon. | abusei thought this story was excellent! keep up the good work! |
| Eden Eyes 2005-06-19 ch 8, | abuseI think this story rocked!! Keep up the great work! |
| svcmc 2005-06-19 ch 8, anon. | abuseOh...so very good...I'm so glad that they were able to get beyond their fears. Can we have a sequel, please, please, please?? |
| svcmc 2005-06-19 ch 8, anon. | abuseOh...so very good...I'm so glad that they were able to get beyond their fears. Can we have a sequel, please, please, please?? |
| Transylvanian 2005-06-16 ch 7, | abuseGood chapter, can't wait to read more. |
| M2S 2005-06-16 ch 7, | abuseGreat story - your writing is excellent. The Laura Sidle you have created is really a slick character. Good characterization of Gil and Sara, as well as the others, especially Nicky and Greg. Look forward to more. |
| Eden Eyes 2005-06-16 ch 7, | abuseGreat job on your story! I adore it! |
| tarrabeena 2005-06-16 ch 7, | abuseAmazing chapter yet again!I loved that Sara has now heard two cofessions from Grissom when neither were meant for her ears!Can't wait for more. |
| smrozier 2005-06-16 ch 7, anon. | abuseOne day, Grissom's going to learn that what he says in the interrogation room will no doubt be heard by Sara. :) Great chapter! |
| lostondarox 2005-06-15 ch 6, | abuseOmg! It's Sara's mom! lol. That's so cool, but I saw it coming from the minute they said that she was missing. I thought that both of them would be there and try to mess with Sara in some way. Anywayz, great story. Keep going. |