I really like this. I"m surprised you don't have more reviews. I would really like to see where this is going. Update soon please!
hugs...empath

OMG I can't believe it, an update, and I didn't had any hope. I still love it by the way; I hope there's more, but I'm happy whit any update I can get. Bye, great fic.

I've really enjoyed you story thus far, even though at times it confuses me. But that's probably just me, so please keep with the updating.

Mo

It's very hard to make me angry at Wes, as I love the guy, but right now I hate him for his attitude toward Lindsey. True, he's not an innocent victim, but neither is Angel, for that matter. Holtz, for one, can certainly testify to that. If Lindsey is disabled for life, if he has no use of either or, God forbid, both of his arms, I won't read any more. He's not all bad, as Blind Date showed. I doubt he's had a day's happiness in his entire life. Please be kind to him.

Why was Lindsey smiling at the end, when he had to be in really great pain? Did he really want Wes to have the scroll but couldn't give it to him? I just hope that he doesn't completely lose the use of his arms--that would be worse than having his hand cut off. Good to see Kate Lockley is willing to be of some help.

You left out the part about Lindsey & the mind readers, but, as neither Gunn nor Wes was there to see it, that's understandable. I think the show itself made him more sympathetic. I guess Gunn is going to cut himself off from his old gang (what's left of it). I can't blame Anne for sticking with the lawyers as long as she needs the money, but I thought she & Lindsey were at least friendly if not actually friends.

I'm not surprised that Wes had sex with other (older) boys while he was in boarding school. I've heard stories. . .Evidently he's improved. I wonder just what it was that David Nabbitt was doing with the demon hooker! Isn't it great that Alonna has gone to England before the massacre? That's something to be grateful for.

I do think going to England is the best thing for Alonna, and now Gunn doesn't have to worry about her. I wonder if they'll be able to rehabilitate Faith. Poor Angel is getting worse & worse. He can't take the visions much longer.

I think sending Alonna to England is a good idea, especially as it would keep her from getting turned in War Zone. I think she may very well turn out to be a Potential, too. I do understand why Wes wants Angel rather than Gunn to take care of him, and I understand Gunn's righteous indignation.

I never liked Faith much, and I hated her the most in this episode of Angel. I don't understand why everyone would accept her redemption but not Lindsey's. That's beside the point, however. I do think that having Alonna be the one to rescue Wes is a good idea, and I like Wes' first job too. As for the sex, I don't like slash (and I HATE having Lindsey slashed), but you wrote it well and, I think, realistically. I understand the relationship and it works.

Poor Wes. I can understand why he'd never go back to England. I like his sense of humor--acronym, indeed! I'm glad you didn't make Lindsey nasty in this chapter, but he was doing his job. I'm always wishing he hadn't accepted the job at Wolfram & Hart, even though I'm sure he didn't know what it would entail at the time. So I guess Gunn & Wes will move on with their relationship?

I remember that The Ring was the episode in which we first met Lilah. It's a good thing not all of the demons got away. Was that really Kate or just an hallucination? So Cordy is on television now? I guess her dreams came true in the birthdayverse. I'm assuming we'll see more Wes/Gunn in the next chapter.

It's good to see my lovely Lindsey here. You mentioned his nice smile but didn't go on to say how gorgeous he is! Elsa was an interesting creature, wasn't she? Kate is really angry with Angel, isn't she? You know, I don't have a lot of sympathy for Angel, knowing what he did to Lindsey.

I like the way Wes & Anne get along; she's a really nice girl who deserves the best, especially after what she's gone through. I do love the way Alonna is worried about her brother. She obviously has a right to be. Is this Sense & Sensitivity? That was an excellent Kate Lockley episode.

As much as I love Wes, and I do almost as much as I love Lindsey, at this point in his life he's not an effective leader. I can see how those kids can handle him easily. It's a good thing Anne was there to set them straight. "She" was not one of my favorite episodes, and I didn't care for either Jheira or Bai Ling.