AWW! THAT WAS SO SWEET! I can definitely relate to that too.. its amazing how u can hate sumone so much just for making u luv them. But anyway, well written and id luv to see more from u!

One word: WOW. I absolutely LOVED this story. It was really cute and slightly humerous at some parts. I just loved it. :)

Aw! How adorable! Very nicely written but just one thing; why do you put things you have written in parentheses so that we read it twice? Like:

It had all started (It had all started)

very good i like it!

aw! that was so fluffingly cute! ron and hermione fluff is always the best. and thanks for that brief glimpse of harry/ginny there ^_^

i really did like this...can't wait to see more of your stuff!

luvies!

I don't see it used twice...*looks again* nope. Oh, unless you mean in another story. Right-o. I like the story, a few typos and so on, and I don't believe Snape would actually give a week's detention for a fouled potion. If that were the case, Neville would never hever have free time, no? Anyways, I'm going to read any other stories you have so expect some more reviews from me.