 Xaiko 2007-10-30 . chapter 2*Stares at the computer screen*
Xaiko: I can't believe it...
Aiko: There, there..
Xaiko: B-but Aiko! Can't you see what I see?!?!?!
Aiko: You've got to accept it Xaiko, after all, it's only a fiction.
*Xaiko glares at best friend*
Xaiko: Nobody makes Rei cry! I hate you Hiwatari!! *starts cursing under her breath at Kai and plots evil stuff*
*Aiko bows apologetically*
Aiko: I'm very sorry Ruby-chan. Xaiko just gets too annoyed when one of her favorite character cries. I hope you will continue this story and update soon. Take Care. and again, I'm very sorry for how Xaiko behaved today. |
 Chibi-Sugar 2007-08-29 . chapter 1I can't wait for you to update! I love this story! : ) |
 Sorrow and Death 2007-08-03 . chapter 2 That was sad TT_TT!
so when r u put up chapter2 |
 Mei Kimari 2007-06-17 . chapter 2I'm assuming you're re-writing the second part...XD But...yeah. not bad so far. It made me smile, that I could read a beyblade fic, and smile...instead of get bored..^^" Update soon!
Kat |
 Sakura-Moonlight 2006-06-25 . chapter 2GREAT STORY! Please update soon! |
 Satan's Bloody Vampire Kitten 2006-06-12 . chapter 2please write more |
 Echo in the Dark 2006-03-09 . chapter 2Oh my God!! She updated!! YAY-ness...
I loved the flashaback thing, at the beginning... Where it's talkin' 'bout how Rei hates storms and Kai asks why he was out in one. And Rei says that he's more afraid of being away from Kai, and then it says “I promise you… I will never… ever leave you alone…” And it ends and Kai leaves...
That made my heart clench... LOVE IT!!
I LOVED THAT SO MUCH!
So...
UPDATE SOON!!
_Echo X "Who says I'm American?" |
 Neena14 2006-02-10 . chapter 2way to go gal
luv ya all the way
keep updatin soon
n wats with driedtears2
u aint updatin
puhleeze do it son
u n ur riting rox
as if deres a need to tel ya
man ur awesum |
 Some random cat person 2006-01-04 . chapter 2 this is GOOD >.< you have to continue ASAP
p.s. KAI HOW COULD YOU! |
 Ming Ming 2006-01-02 . chapter 2 Hey Girl,
Happy Birthday !
I am actually crying right now, and it is a little stange because when I started reading Kai and Ray's part (and I am not joking) a sudden headache hit me with a sudden stomach twist (its horrible) and then the tears came down, I think it is because this chapter reminds me of things that I don't want to happen. Please don't make them happen.
Anyway, leaving the drama, AWESOME !
Just AWESOME,
I just can imagine why DT3 is going to be the best.
Don't keep me hanging like this for so long okay,
Because I will just die, seriously die.
Love the chapter, love the fic,
Hek I love the fics you write and you know that !
Well, see ya soon (I am feeling dizzy right now)
Keep it coming.
Love as always,
Ming Ming |
 Phoenix Taxi Driver 2005-12-31 . chapter 2 This was awesome Ruby ^^ I was surprised at the events and about what Kai did! (Not really lol) Its getting really good keep it up ; ) 8P |
 crimsonrosepetals 2005-12-28 . chapter 2*Aka spaces out in front of computer screen*
Max: Aka? Aka!? *shakes her* Ruby, what did you do to my sister!?!?
Aka: *still spaced out* o-ov-over? d-do-done? b-b-b-but, but WHY!?!?!? *starts crying hysterically* WHY ARE THEY OVER!?!? WHY MUST MAXIE LEAVE!!? WHY IS REI LEAVING??! WHY DID KAI DO THAT!?!?!?! WAH!
Max: Aka, what are you talking about?? Leave? Where will I go? Where'd Rei go?? What did Kai do!?!? *reads fic...mouth fall open* Ruby, what are you doing!!?!?! You're destroying our lives!?!? *starts crying* What did I ever do to you!!? I don't want to leave! Ty-koi! *Tyson and others come rushing inside*
Ty: Woah, Maxie what is it?? *comforts his boyfriend*
Rei: Yeah Aka, what's wrong? *tries (and fails) to comfort hysterical girl*
Kai: *looks at computer screen* Aha! They're reading another one of my sister's fics! Ruby, what did you do no!??!?
Aka: *still sobbing* Read it...
Kai: *reads it...gasps* Ruby, when i get home, we are gonna have a serious talk about your sudden interest in sad fics...
Aka: it was well written though...sniff...
Kai: guys, I'm going home...my sister needs a lecture from me. *leaves*
Aka: Ruby-chan, if you're reading this...RUN! Kai's after you!! and please continue this fic!! See you next update! |
 tntiggris 2005-12-28 . chapter 2Oh
i love that u updated but doesn't II have to finish before I?
It was soo good tho.. i'm all smiles right now
OMG did i tell u that having DrK as Rei's mom is my fave part of II...
well it is
ciao
~*~T of TNT
...PST Kai is evil... he better have a good reason... i bett he didn't even wanna do it... he was forced... i know these things... he had to be...dots... |
 Kiko cat 2005-12-28 . chapter 2man wat happened?
kai..wat happened...to break a promise lik that? |
 chi no hana 2005-12-28 . chapter 2*tears fall* ... *again* update! i wann aknow how this finishes! |