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| Ambiguous Inexplicable Enig... 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseHilarious. Having Ranma-Chan submissive to a dominate woman? Hillarious. Theres also the fact that this is highly original. Kudos for that. While I was reading this I realized this could be an extremely dark-fic, in another light (Especially were it made longer and detailed). You hinted to a sequel at the end. Is it ever going to be released? |
| Krimzonrayne 2007-01-09 ch 1, | abuse...SCARY |
| Daft Strangus 2006-11-04 ch 1, | abuseIs there going to be a sequal of some kind or is it gonna end there because even though this is just spam it is very funny. |
| Materia-Blade 2006-07-11 ch 1, | abuse...? Heh not your usual sort of writing... It's... almost scary actually. If it weren't portrayed it such a funny way it could be easily downright terrifying. Angsty and Dark! Though fortunately... i think... it IS funny. Creepy though. I like it in a twisted sort of way but I can't bring myself to like ranma doing... things like that when he still thinks of himself as a guy. Not portrayed in a bright light at least... I have a hard time saying that considering how much I enjoyed the depressing "Innocence Lost." |
| Thunderstorm101 2006-05-06 ch 1, | abuseWell...at least he'll have more self-controll... Very, very wrong... |
| Sour Schuyler 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abuse"Oh no! Mr. Customer fall into spring of Lesbian Amazonian Dominatrix! Very tragic tale of Lesbian Amazonian Dominatrix who fell in spring and drowned fifteen hundred year ago while chasing busty, redhead sex slave. Now who ever fall into spring become Lesbian Amazonian Dominatrix who will be destined to chase down and discipline busty, redhead girl and make them her sex slave." Oh. My. Gosh. XD XD XD XD XD XD Somehow you made this a very well-written, very entertaining, hysterical fan fiction. ^-^ I commend you! If you could, would you look at one of my fan fictons? |
| Ar-kaos. 2005-10-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseyou are a very sick puppy. and a very amusogn one, keep up the good work |
| Just Guess 2005-07-06 ch 1, | abuseFunny as hell. Hope you do more fics like this one in the future. |
| Alex Ultra 2005-06-13 ch 1, | abuselol, although disturbing at times, this was funny. (I applaud Ranma for not simply falling into focussed rage and attacking Soun, as most of the female population of Nerima would be wont to do when put in a compromising situation. I see Fury building at the Indignation leading to a quest for Revenge; one time is one time too many for most. But then, now that I think about it, Ranma has always been slightly submissive in nature, a trait that Genma was careful to beat into him... O.o' Would Ranma revolt!? There's a question for another day...) Alex Ultra: Funny How The Mind Works, Ne? LATER |
| vizeerlord 2005-06-10 ch 1, anon. | abusesick and twisted, keep it coming, do not make this only a one hit womder |
| SilverBullet23 2005-06-10 ch 1, | abuseNot bad really, quite funny, not exactly what i had expected but really, when is a story that? it was interesting if you ever have more writers block you could do another chapter either a prequel or something like that but keep writing |
| Innortal 2005-06-09 ch 1, | abuseI laughed my ** off at this. I can't wait to see what may happen next, or if Nabiki will ask Ranma if he learned any of the Dominatrix Ryu. Keep writing. Innortal |
| whoa 2005-06-09 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was cool, you should make a sequel! that was very imaginative, but it makes me wonder. How in the world did you come up with THIS? |
| borg rabbit 2005-06-09 ch 1, | abuseBwah ah ah ah Ha HA HA. OOPS was that a stroke, did I laugh myself to death? Oh! look at the beautiful light. |
| AtomBunny 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseROFL - that was good. Never mind it being "spam" - it was funny :) Good job! Atom XX |