wow that was really nice fic, it was a great read, and you have really put yourself into Clark’s shoes, it takes a very good writer to pull off a piece with no dialogue or interaction with other characters. But you did it and well done!

Very nice. I like the repetition!

Nice! Great job. The only critique I have is that you could have made it a little longer. Go into more detail about how Clark's feelings for Lex came to be. What made him want Lex so badly? Did Lex secretly return the desire but not say anything for same reason as Clark did? Or did he keep quiet for different reasons?

Other than that, your fic rocked! Just keep in mind what I said while you write your next fic and you should do great! I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

I like it!! I hope that you will continue with this story, PLEASE!!

Hmm...very interesting. Update soon! Adios! BTW, do you need a beta?
-CatJetRat