 ephemeral eternities. 2009-11-06 . chapter 10I really enjoyed reading this. It's one of the few well-written crossovers on the site. The plot is wonderful, the characterization is flawless and the writing is stunning. I honestly don't have any critisizm at all.
And and and! Kilerikki plays Tousaki Ryouma.
...You are my idol. I LOVE reading the stuff over at FL. Both of you are very very amazing authors, and I can't wait until the next chapter is out. (As well as the next update on FL ;P).
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 morbiDreamscape 2009-10-22 . chapter 6Haha... "Uzumuki Naruko"... That's so true though. A "to" and a "ko" can look really similar in hiragana... although technically, the Japanese version of his name in the anime (refer to the Chuunin exam episodes where the characters' names were displayed on the screens, or just the end credits) "Uzumaki" is in hiragana, and "Naruto" is in katakana, and a katakana "to" looks nothing like a katakana "ko." But that's just being nitpicky. ^_~
However, one point of contention. Naruto says, "Konnichiwa," but considering it's dinnertime, I'd think "Konbanwa" would be more appropriate.
But OMG (now to more important matters), I never realized how similar the descriptions of ANBU and Death Eaters were before. White masks (check), dark cloaks (check), tattoos/marks on their arms (CHECK). That stunning comparison just made my day (night, early morning, whatever).
Next chapter! |
 tabby-tiger-demon 2009-09-07 . chapter 10This is by far one of the most interesting stories i hae ever read on this site. With that, I say congradulations, and i hope to see more soon.
Ebony |
 Lady Azura 2009-08-26 . chapter 10This is very interesting so far. I can't wait to read more! |
 CleverBast 2009-08-24 . chapter 10hope you update soon! |
 mark 2009-07-25 . chapter 10 wow, u are an awesome writer. plz dont stop. |
 Lunatic Pandora1 2009-07-18 . chapter 10And now with a 80% increase of What's Next? |
 Lord Perle 2009-06-26 . chapter 10MORE MORE MORE! |
 MichaelaTheUchiha 2009-06-22 . chapter 9Yeah I reread this, because i was bored and this was just to damn good. So you had better update soon!
Anyways...
Where the heck did Naruto disappear to in the last (last as in the 10th chapter) chapter?! He just screamed "Sasuke!" and then he disappeared...oh yeah he was Kage Bushin. xD He probably dispelled himself to warn Naruto. Silly me, I figured it out myself.
OMFG! Sasuke trying to get into Hogwarts? WTF is going on?
I have so many questions that will not be answered if you do not update soon, so please update.
Please? *puppy dog eye no jutsu* |
 A.C.Y.P. 2009-05-16 . chapter 10Interesting scenario you made.
And now my random input: Harry and co. are so bloody annoying. -_- And it's weird how lenient the Anbu are in giving into their whims. Well, apart from Naruto. xD
Harry needs a good whack on the head to teach him that he's not a hero that deserves to know everything I reckon lol.
Anyways, back to the story...hmm, layout and everything makes it easy to read, and the dialogue is interesting. Interactions between characters seem a little off though-I was always under the impression that Neji was partially respectful to Naruto o_o. Meh.
Thanks for a nice read, and update when you can! |
 Seishuru Magni 2009-04-21 . chapter 10Well this is interesting. There are language charms, as witnessed at the Quidditch world up and during the tri-wizard tournament. But other than that I've liked it so far.. |
 Purble 2009-03-31 . chapter 10 Yay! Update!
They finally found the bijiu. I like how you set up its prison.
And Yes! Sasuke! I wonder what he's doing there?! Muhahaha!
When the trio got Sasuke with the shield and then felled him, for a moment, I wonder what happened to the Hyuuga and what they were doing. It felt like they disappeared (but that's likely just me).
I appreciate the fact that each side (Harry Potter and Naruto canon universe) has its pluses and minuses and that no other is really superior (technically).
Tell me, that roaring from the woods. Was it the two-tails, or was it Naruto reacting to the fact that his once best-friend is here? *evil grin* |
 Arcellant 2009-03-22 . chapter 10Haha! What a wonderful work of fiction! You've played this crossover perfectly, not too much and not too little! The interactions you two do are incredible, especially seeing as to the radical differences in both fandoms. I love what you've done! Keep it up, okay?
And on a side note, you've sent me into peals of laughter whenever I imagine what would happen if Fred and George had made it their personal mission to prank "the guards." Too good... XD |
 Little Kunai 2009-03-21 . chapter 10next chapter soon please! |
 Little Kunai 2009-03-21 . chapter 9this was an incredibly intense chapter, it had me tense and worried that things would go even worse. |