 Nibzo 2005-09-08 . chapter 14NAKATSU?! r u by chance a fan of Hana-Kimi? Both Nakatsu's are very loveable (the one from that series and the one from the story) i loved this story; it was so cool!
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 RyokiLover 2005-08-06 . chapter 14 OH MAN IT OVER! IT WAS SO GOOD! great job ^_^! |
 Jenbo 2005-07-24 . chapter 14ahh the end. I loved it. It was so cool! great job. |
 bobthebrick 2005-07-24 . chapter 14 Oh MY!! i can't believe it ended..i always feel said when a good fanfic ends..that was a very cute ending..write more hot gimmick fanfics!! |
 Xx Soul xX 2005-07-23 . chapter 14I love the ending! So Ryoki and Hatsumi didn't have anymore kids?? aw! oh well, great fic. it was nicely done! |
 Momo-Sama 2005-07-22 . chapter 13Aww! She had the baby! So cute! |
 Darkk Imp 2005-07-21 . chapter 13 I love it! poor shinogu though. |
 Xx Soul xX 2005-07-20 . chapter 4So Kari DID sleep with shinogu... |
 RyokiLover 2005-07-19 . chapter 13 VERY CUTE CHAPTER! YAY SHE HAD THE BABY XD! it was a very cute name to ^_^! ha ha ha the baby threw up on Ryoki that was funny lol ^_^! i love how Ryoki plays a bi part in this fic and Hatsumi is FINALLY back to normal Hatsumi lol ^_^! keep up the good work ^_^ and you actually have me feeling bad for shingou *and trust me ive never felt bad for shinogu lol* keep up the good work ^_^! |
 CrimeSceneSC 2005-07-19 . chapter 13por shinogu! wah! please update soon! |
 bobthebrick 2005-07-19 . chapter 13 nice update! i have a feeling that shinugo is gonna show up at the wedding anyways..the baby was being born quick..thought there might be some complications..is asuza really true to kari tho?? update soon! |
 Jenbo 2005-07-19 . chapter 13the chapter was shorter but still really good. poor shinogu... |
 the littlest weasley 2005-07-15 . chapter 12aw, that was so cute. i love the wedding. an mizu was just too cute in the last scene there.
pleasepleaseplease update soon! |
 Jenbo 2005-07-14 . chapter 12it was so cute. I wonder if mizuku will ever change her mind about azusa being the bad man. |
 RyokiLover 2005-07-14 . chapter 12 OMG THEY FINALLY GOT MARRIED XD! YAY! it sounded like a very nice wedding ^_^! and poor shinogu *O MY GOD DID I JUDT WRITE THAT* i still dont like him but i would perfer her with shinogu. Mizuku is so cute XD! i also like the Ryoki and Kari flashback ^_^ but i so happy that Ryoki and Hatsumi got married and YAY! kari's baby is gonna be born in the next chaoter!?!?!?! XD! |