He nice job here, you portrayed Shinn's anger quite well I think. My only gripe is the OOC behaviour he dispayed in sluting to the Captain, just doesn't seem like something he would do, and especially not at that moment.

Holy God-loving SHIT. Someone actually looked at something from SHINN's point of view? You mean I'm NOT the only one who does that?

...does God love me yet?

No real complaints here, partially because I'm still enthralled that someone isn't bashing poor Shinn for once, and I do like the scenes between Shinn and Meyrin and Shinn and Talia. Both of those characters never get any sort of development and are otherwise pretty much talking heads on the bridge.

This just makes me look forward to the next episode even more.

Very nice. I love seeing looks at Shinn that are respectful to his character. ^_^ And you did a nice job of filling in the blanks. Good job.