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I wonder... Does Atemu have abandonment issues? It kind of makes since. His parents were never there, and the only person he ever had was Yami, and then last chapter you put in a line 'he would do whatever Bakura wanted to make sure the other stayed'. Now that sounds like abandonment issues to me, since he did something someone else wanted to make sure they didn't leave. But hey, I dun know how your mind works. It could be something else! I dunno...

Regardless of that fact where I think Atemu has abandonment issues (which I like that idea A LOT), I love this story. And I wish you would update on AFF so we couldn't read the full lemons and such.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

hi! i'm afraid i wouldn't update until nxt month 'coz our second quarter finals are coming (or quarterly test as we call it). nyeh. English is pretty interesting - we're learning word formation and i never knew 'shampoo' is african... nyeh.

anyways, v.g. chapter, dragon! hope u update sometime!

-UR FRIEND,

angelictransmition

LOL, this was a fun chapter. So Yami was a tad bit off on things, but it was sweet of him to want to help out his friend and brother. And it's nice of Atemu to tell Bubbles to go after Bakura if he wants to, even though Atemu isn't exactly happy with that. Eh, it'll give Seth a chance, right?

Fantastic chapter! Update soon!

I love this is really you write got to go ok bye.

Mizu _

hehe, this was hilarious yet again, the date...yeah Yami is a little naive huh, and Seto was being a little possesive, lol, and the beginning hehe loved it. Update soon, i love this fic.

*puts on her furry, red, cow print, cowboy hat*

YeeHaw! That was a good chapter Partner!

:p

Yami and Atemu are great together, lol. Loved Malik's keychain *snicker*. Poor Kura, first he gets insulted by everyone then find out that Atemu and Malik are on a date. Malik was hot on the bull. Atemu is sweet for letting the gay blond go after Kura.

Dragon again a great chappie,

I liked this and it was fun to read at the same tome. I hope Yami and Seto will work it out and Atemu will get it through his thick head that he wants Seth for himself.

I hate it when the twins are so hard headed.

I like the fact that Yami thinks he can have a real relashionship with Seto. Seth doesn't think so. I'm glad that he is defieing his brother for love and I hope he will continue doing what is right for the heart.

Bye for the now and I hope you update soon, Darlene.

Lol, Atemu doing a hoe-down and in country clothes? Claasic, simply classic. I still want Jou to appear somewhere in this story...KEEP IT UP!

Yay update! Kura's such a little perv, but his attempts at hitting on Yami were amusing (do you help Malik wax his bikini zone?) I like how quickly Atemu figured out that Malik had a thing for Bakura, cause I wanna see him slapped together with Seth *sigh*

*laughs hysterically*...The ending was great...poor Yami...I really, really want Bakura and Malik to get together (even though Yami; Atemu, whatever you call him, and Bakura are my favourite couple...alwell...I can't wait 'till you get them togeher (and Atemu and Seth..and something more with Seto and Yami)

Love Kim *still laughing*

Ohmigod! That has got to be the funniest thing I've read on in a long time. I've never seen anyone do this kind of twin thing before. Usually it's the yamis being twins with the hikaris, but this is different, fresh. I like it! Can't wait until you update!

Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

I'm beginning to love you both! :D this is just awesome! :D

updates soons. this chappie was so funny though i would like to know what was siad in spanish since i dont speak it. but since yami said it was perverted you dont have to translate it. updates soons