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Tatsumaki-sama 2008-09-24 ch 1,	abuseThis was tearfully, tragically, heartbreakingly amazing. I was bawling by the end. The deaths of Sanji, Robin and especially Luffy has and forever will haunt the remaining members. Luffy always meant so much to Zoro and after ten, long years, it looks like Zoro will join his captain. I found it interesting that Zoro took Mihawk's little ship and traveled around just like the previous greatest swordsman, going wherever the sea sent him. I also liked that you wrote more on Usopp's perspective than the others, aside from Zoro. It truly brings out the pain and loss even greater. Once again, this is simply an incredible story. Great job.
m4kub3X 2008-07-29 ch 1,	abusei don't know how many times i've read this (gomen ne, i've finally made myself click the "submit review" button), and every time there are just certain parts in the story that makes my blood run cold just because i can feel their (cough zoro's cough) pain-- yes your style of writing has that much power... "Zoro stood. Superhuman will. Zoro drew his swords. Superhuman will. Hina's ship split into three pieces. Death's will" I absolutely loved the finality of that -- "death's will" -- i can also picture Zoro reacting the way that he did, not just towards Hina and that fight in particular, but being empty after the loss of Luffy... the achronological flow of the plot was wonderful and i absolutely loved how you ended. It was so sweet hearing how much Luffy means to Zoro, which just makes the whole story that much more tragic...all and all, it was beautifully written. Bravo!
animeXIII 2008-06-24 ch 1,	abusesad but good very very good ^^
Prosopopeia 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abuseI gotta say, I read this ages ago and was too lazy to review. But then I got the sudden urge to read this again and went on a little hunt to track it down. Now I'm finally leaving the proper review it deserves. What to say? This story's so absolutely beautiful and heartbreaking, I can't really form the words to describe it. You've managed to capture everyone so vividly and sadly; the whole scenario is just breathtakingly beautiful and morbid. I love how Usopp is a steady focal point from beginning to end, and it saddens me to no ends seeing how his voice has changed. The story with Zoro is utterly wonderful. By the end of reading this story, I felt a hollowness in me. But it was a really awesome hollowness, you know? Good deathfics are hard to find and this one really hit home. That feeling of, "Omg, I can't believe you killed off Luffy, Sanji, and Robin and this was so incredibly sad!" was great. You really arouse some powerful emotions with this and kudos to you for that. =]
Santoryuu-Zoro 2008-02-10 ch 1,	abusesniff That was sniff so sad~sobsobsob That was deep. Touching in a cold way. I don't have words to express my astonishment at this great story.
Totnes 2008-01-06 ch 1,	abuseThis is an amazing story. You surely have a gift with words... I know some of your other stories - big fan of Ace/Smoker here - so I kinda knew what to expect... but this one is a treasure. Exquisite, sharp and clear - so much that it pains to read it and yet one continues. Inching forward one word at the time - maybe hoping that there would be something like an illusion or a dream... It is a beauty, this story. And it is heartbreakingly so. Thank you.
Gonrie 2007-12-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseI think I'm really lucky to have read this! This story is really awesome! Good jo!
Soon to be World Dominator 2007-11-11 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is... wonderful. It's chilling, terrifying, so desperately sad (Especially the thing about Chopper and when Usopp swims, it made me almost-cry). The way you worded things, the structure, the language, the pace, the flow was superb. ... ... ...**. I need to go cry somewhere. -wails-
Ariaeris 2007-11-05 ch 1,	abuseI cannot even put into words what this made me feel... it was just excellent.
LuffysAngel 2007-10-30 ch 1,	abuseI wanted to cry but couldn't. Amazing fiction! ^_^
o4o86 2007-10-29 ch 1, anon.	abusei have to admit i was in a bit of shock since i didn't read the warning, but along the way it really touched me. i find this beautiful and realistic. thanks for the great read~
HelioQueen 2007-10-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat shocked me. still in shock. The first death was so simply said,and still I had to read it three times to believe it. He reached his dream. And it doesn´t matter. I´m odd "a king beats a jack" It waked up, doesn´t comletely fit in but doesn´t annoy. I´m impressed if you understand this. rambling. Heli
Ripuku 2007-10-14 ch 1,	abuseyou made me cry. I LOVE YOU! THIS IS FRICKING AMAZING!
Autumnights 2007-09-30 ch 1,	abuseHow can i describe what you've just done to my heart...
Starburst Strata 2007-09-12 ch 1,	abuseI'm literally speechless. I can't come up with any words to describe how this made me feel. Instead, I'll just say that I'm struggling to hold back tears. Perfect and heartbreaking.

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