so sad :(

wow. that was dark! made me soo sad! But what i loved is that you told it through a grown usopp's point of view, and that was just awesome! thanks a bunch for sharing!^^

amazing... :3
love teh angst...

I absolutely adore your stories! All the angst and drama you put into them is amazing! This one I was crying a little. You are truly a tragedy writer. ZoroxLuffy is one of my fav couples and you brought them to a whole new level. It kinda depressed me a little but in a good way. Please keep writing

That was horrible!


But i loved it.
It was incredably sad, and made me cry though.
Good thing this dint actually happen in the show though, cause if it did, i'd send the creator hate letters 'till he knew my name and address by heart

So beautiful I actually cried !!

I cried. Its so sad.. That's why I love it. You should have made it longer. And more tragic. Me adores it XD

you sure knows how to make a tragedy, ne?
really... I got in the mood of this fiction and I'm starting to think of deaths... -.- it sure is no good...

oh, well, this fic, I loved!

This was tearfully, tragically, heartbreakingly amazing. I was bawling by the end. The deaths of Sanji, Robin and especially Luffy has and forever will haunt the remaining members. Luffy always meant so much to Zoro and after ten, long years, it looks like Zoro will join his captain. I found it interesting that Zoro took Mihawk's little ship and traveled around just like the previous greatest swordsman, going wherever the sea sent him. I also liked that you wrote more on Usopp's perspective than the others, aside from Zoro. It truly brings out the pain and loss even greater. Once again, this is simply an incredible story. Great job.

i don't know how many times i've read this (gomen ne, i've finally made myself click the "submit review" button), and every time there are just certain parts in the story that makes my blood run cold just because i can feel their (*cough* zoro's *cough*) pain-- yes your style of writing has that much power...

"Zoro stood. Superhuman will. Zoro drew his swords. Superhuman will. Hina's ship split into three pieces. Death's will"

I absolutely loved the finality of that -- "death's will" -- i can also picture Zoro reacting the way that he did, not just towards Hina and that fight in particular, but being empty after the loss of Luffy...

the achronological flow of the plot was wonderful and i absolutely loved how you ended. It was so sweet hearing how much Luffy means to Zoro, which just makes the whole story that much more tragic...all and all, it was beautifully written. Bravo!

sad but good very very good ^^

I gotta say, I read this ages ago and was too lazy to review. But then I got the sudden urge to read this again and went on a little hunt to track it down. Now I'm finally leaving the proper review it deserves.

What to say? This story's so absolutely beautiful and heartbreaking, I can't really form the words to describe it. You've managed to capture everyone so vividly and sadly; the whole scenario is just breathtakingly beautiful and morbid. I love how Usopp is a steady focal point from beginning to end, and it saddens me to no ends seeing how his voice has changed. The story with Zoro is utterly wonderful. By the end of reading this story, I felt a hollowness in me. But it was a really awesome hollowness, you know? Good deathfics are hard to find and this one really hit home. That feeling of, "Omg, I can't believe you killed off Luffy, Sanji, and Robin and this was so incredibly sad!" was great. You really arouse some powerful emotions with this and kudos to you for that. =]

*sniff* That was *sniff* so sad~*sobsobsob* That was deep. Touching in a cold way. I don't have words to express my astonishment at this great story.

This is an amazing story. You surely have a gift with words... I know some of your other stories - big fan of Ace/Smoker here - so I kinda knew what to expect... but this one is a treasure. Exquisite, sharp and clear - so much that it pains to read it and yet one continues. Inching forward one word at the time - maybe hoping that there would be something like an illusion or a dream... It is a beauty, this story. And it is heartbreakingly so. Thank you.

I think I'm really lucky to have read this! This story is really awesome! Good jo!