|Reviews for Those Were The Days|
| Jerseygirl91 7/5/06 . chapter 1
I LOVE the idea...
I think it would be a good idea, though, to take it outta script form...it makes the story more...real (or something like that...lol)
EX: "Well...wait a minute." Jenny said as she got up and opened the door. John Jr. stood there "Get out of my doorway John." Jenny ordered.
but other then that great GREAT ideas and i will be sure to continue reading this.
| red lighting 5/14/06 . chapter 1
| SonnyAngel 9/17/05 . chapter 1
script form is very hard to read, it makes it feel so stilted. Try writing it in story form with quotations for dialogue and it'll be much better. But it's a good idea although, why is Magda a freshman if she's 16? did she flunk or what?