This was literally the first story I read ever on this site a few years ago...I enjoyed it very much, and I really hope you decide to update this at some point...I will be waiting...

I have read many stories about general grievous and this fic is the only and true love for me. Where have you been all these years? And why I found THIS masterpiece just now? Im gonna wait what happens nexst in great joy :3

Peace and cake and muffins
~Tinski~

this is for all the chapters...
there amazing great fantastic!
i love this story...one of my favorites
please update soon

many a time have i read through this story . . . and many a time i had not complamented. this time i intended to. YOUR STORY IS ONE OF MY FAVS, BUT . . . i do wish u would progress past chapter 18 plz.

I really love this story
cant wait until the next chapter

hi! r u going to write more? i hope so! =D

This story is well thought out in my opinion. It is very well written, too. Very visual, as good stories should be. I hope more chapters will appear soon, as I wish to see what happens to Shika, and what Grievous's choice will be.

Agh, you need to continue!

This better not be dead, or... Well, it's probably dead, but it was a good read.

looks good so far
keep it up
BB

YAY!This is fantastic!General Grievous is one of my favorite characters from Star Wars!Ad this fic is absolutely fabulous.I like Shika she is very eh,believable,like the conversation between General and Shika and the power struggle between General and Dooku!I hope that you didn´t abandon this fic,it woukld be shame.I just hope that it tooks you a long time to update,but that is manageable.

Iocus

P.s.Keep up the good work!

OMG!! Please tell me this story hasn't died! Because if it did, then I'd be really upset!!

Please update this! It is so good and it's VERY rare to find a good General Grievous story with a female OC. XD (Or at least one that has more than 5 chapters) Of course only update when you have time! No rushing here! I just really look forward to a chapter 19!

Sam ;)

Wow. Awesome story! I absolutely LOVE it! Please please please continue it! I shall go insane if you dont!
-Fennecfox03

Amazing! This is one of the best stories I have ever read!

Great story so far! Wonder what Grievous will say? You are doing a great job with this story, even without a beta! I love this story! Update update update!