 Limelight 2005-06-11 . chapter 1Hey! It’s nice to see a new face writing Star Wars, especially Han/Leia. And let me say you made a great debut here!
“Still, as she takes the second medal, and as he lowers his head so she can drape it around his neck, he feels a sudden desire to wedge his way into the chink he’s found in her impersonal façade, to be that continued annoyance that reminds her, day after day, that she’s not above insults and laughter and feeling.”
I believe that captured their relationship in a sentence. Wonderful.
You wrote this in Spanish class? Your ability to multitask astounds me! :)
I really hope to see more from you!
Lovely piece,
LL |
 Pitdroid 2005-06-09 . chapter 1 Beautiful job on your first Han/Leia vig. I think you did an admirable job with your first stab at two very complicated characters. The final line really does capture the true Han Solo. |
 2005-06-09 . chapter 1 hahaha, that was cute! I love Han and Leia, and you have Han's cocky attitude down well. It's a nice way to show the beginning of their relationship! |
 GreatOne 2005-06-09 . chapter 1 Fantastic little viggie! :D |
 Jasen Morgan 2005-06-09 . chapter 1Hey!! sup. K, well, i thought that this was written really well. The descriptions were perfect. The only thing that bothered me was that Han doesn't seem like the kind of person that would think that much about getting a medal. I mean, Lea confessed love to him and he says 'i know'. That kind of confident guy wouldn't spend that long soul searching in my opinion. But what do i matter? the end was the best characterization of Han. That's the best part. And i wouldn't think that Lea would be so secret, but oh well. don't mind me. those were just my first impressions. :) keep it up!! |
 cheersweetie 2005-06-09 . chapter 1Good job. I really enjoyed this story! You should write more Star Wars! |
 Window Girl 2005-06-09 . chapter 1How cool. |
 Sarah 2005-06-09 . chapter 1 I loved it. Your writing is great, and I hope you to see more writings from you! Cheers. |
 HanSolosGal 2005-06-09 . chapter 1... I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING A NEW FIC! *grins* |