nice the whole story was awesome

Not bad, I liked it, especially the way you got all the couples, that most everyone agrees should be together, together in a decently realistic way. This one would make a good manga.

Wow talk about histting all the genres in one story. From Waff to dark, from comedy to drama, from Romance to hatred. All in one neat package. Excellent use of an ACC(Nayami) and even though you kept the accepted pairings, you made them come together logically and believably!
Nicely done!
dennisud

Excellent ending. Outstanding!

LOL! Kuno was fantastic!

Great ending. I disapprove of the

typical pairings. They just don't

work for me, but I have to say you

did a great job. I liked it!

Dr. Tofu comes across as a bit of a scumbag.

The plot thickens. So she was having her own daughter tortured?

"Yes, you is too too nonexistent in the chest region!"

*chuckle*

Good explanation for why Akane is spending so much time

trying to get Ryoga and Ukyou together and not thinking

of Ranma.

Dark ending.

You are working on pairing up Ukyou and Ryoga

much too quickly. It you wanted it to be

believable you would have to have tossed in a

couple of flashbacks and some interior

monologues for a month or two beforehand.

When did Akane become so concerned with playing

matchmaker that she forgot Ranma completely?

Kuno as usual has played his part perfectly!

*grin*

"that looked like the unholy union of a cooking utensil and a blade"

*snicker*

Since when is Akane as talented as the other fiancés?

Akane sure causes a lot of his problems. He

was planning a trip by himself and she has

to involve all the people he was avoiding.

The interaction between Ryoga and Ukyou seems

off somehow.

So where did Ryoga's clothes go? They should

still have been on the roof where Ukyou could

easily have seen them.

We need a reason for Nabiki to be up in the

middle of the night for her discovering of

Ryoga's secret to be believable.

Good start. A little too Akane-centric for my tastes,

but then that's just personal preference. You have

a nice clear writing style that's easy to read.

Truly magnificent story! A wonderful ending!

A truly amazing story! Each chapter is quite an adventure! This has been a very emotional chapter with the way you ended it! I am excited to read the next chapter!

this is getting cool. So whats the big secret of the mountain?